Reviews for Harry Potter and the Chocolate Factory
Linkwonka88 chapter 7 . 1/4
You must continue plz I wanna read more this has piqued my curiosity and I wanna know if Harry wins and what was in his pants pocket?
white collar black wolf chapter 7 . 1/2
Liked it can't wait to read more
white collar black wolf chapter 6 . 1/2
Really Liked it
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 7 . 1/2
I really like it a lot! **
ElementalMaster16 chapter 7 . 1/2
these are some fun chapters!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! and a happy new year! (_)
foxchick1 chapter 7 . 1/2
That is what happens when you don't take warnings seriously and How did Willy's house disappear?
and is he somehow related to the Blacks?
doubledamn chapter 7 . 1/2
So did the father cast a Fidelius while his kid was gone, or did young Wonka's declaration have the effect of a magical oath, resulting in a pseudo-Fidelius effect, that prevented him from returning to the house while his father has those rules?
charm13insomnia chapter 7 . 1/1
yay another chapter looking forwards to the next
lilyflower50 chapter 7 . 1/1
please have harry win
DaYaNa1997 chapter 6 . 1/1
Hello, this is getting a little bit confusing, is the cross-over about Harry Potter/Charlie and the Chocolate Facory OR Harry Potter/Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory?
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 6 . 1/1
I really like it! **
doubledamn chapter 6 . 1/1
I take it you've seen Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them? Let me see if I've got this right.

In this fic, the Scamander Family were put in charge of scouting out potential Obscurials and preventing the 'breaking point' that results in the creation and unleashment of an Obscurius.

Mr. Wonka was almost an Obscurial, but he found an outlet, preventing his 'breaking point', as such, the Scamander Family kept an eye on him from a distance to:
a) ensure his 'breaking point' is never realized.
and
b) to see if his outlet could be used with other potential Obscurials.

How close was I?
bleach103 chapter 6 . 1/1
please update quicker next time
C.A. Crest chapter 6 . 1/1
Fantastic! I enjoyed the boat ride as it is one of my favorite scenes from both book and movie. I never really thought about what was shown during the ride though. I always believed they were just random scary moments, not the actual fears of the people on board. I hope your re-writes go well and I look forward to the next chapter! The plot thickens with anticipation as you mention Newt Scamander.
Reikson chapter 6 . 1/1
Magical America in canon are hostile to Gringotts and goblins and are total isolationists to the Muggles, which they call No-Majs.
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