|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Chocolate Factory|
| James Birdsong chapter 7 . 8/6
| meme1012 chapter 7 . 8/6
Loving the story. Please update more. I can't wait to see what happens! I am not good very good at reviews, but when I like something, I want to continue reading it. All I can say is that it flowed pretty well to me. I didn't have to try and and figure out a weirdly written sentence like I find myself doing sometimes, or dealing with inconsistent back and forth goings between two different places. So in my book your one of my newly A 1s!
| C.A. Crest chapter 7 . 7/31
I really love this story and hope you plan to update it. I don't know why, but I've always enjoyed the idea of Willy Wonka being a wizard. And having a story with him and Harry just seems interesting. Good luck with your writings!
| manapohaku2 chapter 7 . 7/31
are you going to be switching the songs?
| manapohaku2 chapter 5 . 7/31
you mixed both movies up. cool.
| redwolf23456 chapter 7 . 7/28
Great story so far
| sylvelle chapter 3 . 5/8
The original of course always.
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/25
vivement la suite mais ce serai plus drôle si a la place d'Augustus s'avait était Dudley lol
| Linkwonka88 chapter 7 . 1/4
You must continue plz I wanna read more this has piqued my curiosity and I wanna know if Harry wins and what was in his pants pocket?
| white collar black wolf chapter 7 . 1/2
Liked it can't wait to read more
| white collar black wolf chapter 6 . 1/2
Really Liked it
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 7 . 1/2
I really like it a lot! **
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 7 . 1/2
these are some fun chapters!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! and a happy new year! (_)
| foxchick1 chapter 7 . 1/2
That is what happens when you don't take warnings seriously and How did Willy's house disappear?
and is he somehow related to the Blacks?
| doubledamn chapter 7 . 1/2
So did the father cast a Fidelius while his kid was gone, or did young Wonka's declaration have the effect of a magical oath, resulting in a pseudo-Fidelius effect, that prevented him from returning to the house while his father has those rules?