Reviews for Harry Potter and the Chocolate Factory
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15
Update please
ninjacatblue chapter 4 . 7/2
More! I need more! This a fantastic start, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. This section is woefully small, and this is a great piece.
sad sabrin chapter 4 . 5/26
Nice
Please continue the story
QuartSigma chapter 4 . 4/30
I really like how you combined the original musical movie and Tim Burton's movie here. Really nicely written and I have to wonder how things will go from here especially when the Wizarding World's involved
VerucaBeyotch chapter 1 . 2/21
Plz update I wanna know what happens and plz use the Oompa Loompas from original movie the songs can be the Tim Burton version also can you do the tunnel of Hell and make Wonka sing Pure Imagination I don't care if you mix all the Wonka's together... If you people consider the new version of Ommoa Loompas to be than we will eats you they were really crappy even though the movie was good I still prefer the original ones...*Grrr*
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 4 . 1/15
I really like it a lot! **
Linkwonka88 chapter 4 . 12/1/2015
Ok you must continue this plz I love and cant wait for more and what will happen to Harry and the rest of the kids
bleach103 chapter 4 . 10/4/2015
please update
bluebird397 chapter 4 . 9/19/2015
Oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE update!
jeanette9a chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
regarding your last question, i just want to say i like the new songs.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 4 . 5/4/2015
hmmm, interesting fic so far!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
doubledamn chapter 4 . 4/29/2015
Oh now THIS is interesting. A fusion of the two films with Gringotts taking a special interest in the Potter Heir and what I assume is a Squib under the employ of the Ministry for Magic as a media-related damage control agent.

This is getting good. Don't stop, and if at all possible keep in the Wonka Hell Tunnel, if nothing else it gives you an excuse to give Vernon a heart attack.
doubledamn chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
Seriously? Definitely NOT the Burton Loompas. To even consider them is a ludicrousness on par with the average episode of Adventure Time.
KinZoku591 chapter 4 . 4/28/2015
Fascinating idea for a story, i can only hope you update more especially once you brought in the goblins.
AnnElfwind chapter 4 . 4/27/2015
I have the feeling this is a mix between the older and the newer Chocolate factory?
If so, you're doing a good job putting them together.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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