Reviews for Flirt
Guest chapter 15 . 11/25/2020
awh this was really cute and beautiful to read this story was such a emotional rollercoaster for me thank you for writing this (:
Guest chapter 15 . 4/26/2020
This story is so fucking cute, I lived reading it...
Guest chapter 15 . 4/18/2020
Wow. Just wow. This is now going to be one of my favourites. I loved all the cute little love confessions. I love how Harry doesn’t have that much money as Draco but Draco is okay with that. When Harry went down on on knee I cried it was such a sweet moment. I also like the fact that Draco has changed and become a better person cuz of Harry. You are mad talented. Tysm I needed this. xxx
loveunaruto chapter 15 . 4/17/2020
Oh god it was such a emotional rollercoaster. Even though I had already read this story, it still brings such emotions. The feelings you potrayed. The words you used. I could feel their desperation, their guilt, their sorrow and their joy. It was like I was living thier life. It was and still is one of the best emotionally articulated story in fanfic. And I always love to read it time and again. I hope you are still writing stories somewhere.
shchi8 chapter 2 . 1/16/2020
the story is really really interesting and the detailed words of the author is much appreciated, however the way the pov jumps from harry to draco in the middle of the story is confusing and little bit turn off. maybe i'll try this story another time :)
shch8 chapter 1 . 1/16/2020
okay first chapter in and im really intrigued. what is it that harry was smelling? and why is it that he's the only one smelling it. and also, draco you sexy mf, I love you.
Willowohwisp chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
first chapter down abd Im intrigued. The writing flow is stylish and colourful. Well done! Im going to read the rest now
Hjeolr chapter 15 . 6/27/2019
Wow that was probably the best fic i've ever read
You write so well and transport us to your own universe, it's really stunning
You convey feelings with words so amazingly, it's just so pleasant to read every single one of your sentences
You really did an amazing job on this fiction and i hope you keep writing amazing stories like this one!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2019
I have read only one chapter yet but OMG
Hersheythegreat chapter 14 . 3/30/2019
The rubber duck!
Rika Azumi chapter 15 . 3/24/2019
This was absolutely perfect and I am so happy you posted it. I loved it!
malboroo chapter 15 . 2/19/2019
I have mixed feelings. Your story is actually well written, but I didn't like how you described Draco and Harry. Many authors (and you as well) tend to think that grown up man behaving like a child is cute. I don't find anything cute about it, especially when such behaviour is connected with sex scene. It makes me cringe inwardly - all this blushing on Draco's side - because Harry looked at him or said something - and then bam! Sex. No, just no. Your Draco behaves like 13 years old shy girl, not like an adult, 27 years old man. MAN. Men don't blush because their boyfriend uses "f*ck" word. I do know people have different tastes but literally a teenage girl in adult man body having sex with another man... this thought is dangerously close to paedophilia. :/ Also, although fan fiction authors have freedom to present their characters how they like, it should be at least well reasoned. In your story Draco is (supposedly) wealthy, hard-working, very succesful businessman. As such he should be portrayed as strong, very tough, self-confident person, having to deal with other people, negotiating and so on on daily basis. This Draco shouldn't stupidly blush, shouldn't being shy because it doesn't make any sense. He wouldn't achieve his position with a timid teenage girl psyche, really.
Harry, on the other hand, behaves like a teenage boy from stone age. Sometimes it is even funny, but I don't find anything funny about Draco.
Moonbeams and Magick chapter 1 . 1/1/2019
I read this about a year ago and was distraught for a while because I couldn't find it and I was trying to show this to my boyfriend's brother who is literally James in real life and he laughed so much. He has a son and yes, his name is Harry but his name isn't James. Anyways, amazing story. I love it so much! Thank you for writing this!
Lib chapter 10 . 6/16/2018
The only thing I hate is that Draco doesn't even acknowledge his mistake in this. It's always Harry being faulted. I really hope Draco apologizes first, just once.
teddyyyy123 chapter 15 . 6/1/2018
I suck a reviews but this was amazing oh my gosh. Thank you for this fic. I was sooo obsessed with it and I loved the ending. It was great.
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