Reviews for project: SIREN
michael chapter 21 . 5/17/2010
If I had to choose, I think this would be my favorite entry. I love the description of the vision and really giving Hanuda a sense of mysticality and ethereality. I love this.
michael chapter 7 . 5/17/2010
Interesting shift in grammar and syntax. In general. Each journal entry really shows a distinct person (when it means to be). I really feel like I'm looking through different eyes each time the point of view changes.
michael chapter 5 . 5/17/2010
I like the very end of this. When Natalia questions to whom she is to pray or from whom this is a punishment, it speaks volumes to the faults and discrepancies of religion. Very well done. )
TStabler chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
) suspense and drama and I can feel wverything you have put your characters through: the turmoil, the aguish. Keep going!