If you ever get the urge to continue this or write a sequel, I'll happily help *coughforcecough* you to get it out there. This really was an entertaining fic, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Love and glomps (and pancakes!),

Kali

Umm... unable to think of witty comment at the moment. I wish I could write like you though... *hangs head in depressed manner, heads toward corner of shame* Reading on!

Oh Jareth, you rascal... You know what I just noticed? Jareth turns into a white barn owl, kind of like Hedwig from Harry Potter... wow my thouhts are random today. Off to chapter three! *cape twirl, manaical laughter*

Well... wasn't that creep-tastic! The dream was very well-written, and I love how possesive Jareth sounds. Knowing you, you'd probably make pancakes instead of fainting at the sight of the Goblin King in your bed... Reading on!

(and forcing you to publish stuff is my pleasure XD)

An wonderful ending to a good story!

Great chapter! Thanks for the post :)

I love how Jareth anticipated Sarah's reactions in the letter

Winsome, and pleasant reading. Keep smiling. :-)

Sequel plz.

Very Interesting. Keep smiling. :-)

An enjoyable chapter!

I do like the idea you've used, Sarah having a dream, which - of course - is true. Yet, her reaction to faint...Well, it doesn't really hit me as very Sarah-like behaviour. But, I admit, everyone has their own ways to depicting Sarah and Jareth. Judging from the first chapter, the story has a nice start, nevertheless.

Wondeful. I'm was so scared with the first chapter...Jareth really knwos how to do a cruel joke! Congratulations!

Glad to see you continuing the story!

Thank for sharing this reading today. Keep smiling. :-)

Cool to read. Thanks for sharing. Have a good weekend. Keep smiling. :-)