|Reviews for A daughter of the night|
| CuTii3Pii3 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
this was rlly cute but there are some things you shud know...
1. when Benjamin say "Who are you" it shoud have been "Men Enta" miin is where and men is who. you also put the the word backward as it said "Enta miin!"
this is a really good one shot and i'm sorry i didn't sign in.
Your CuTii3Pii3 ;)
| Ms. New York chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Very sweet story about Benjamin and Tia. :D I love how you used actual Egyptian language in the story to make it realistic!
My favorite line was perhaps towards the end: "She was as flawless as the jasmine flower in her hair." I don't know why but it's my favorite line as well as "I kissed a daughter of the night."
Loved this story! :)