Good story but should be friendship and suspense not romance

Man Ash is such a dick-_-
Yeah I know the Frighteners with the awesome Michael J. Fox n_n

This is so sweet and lovely! I have never read a 1st person written this well, it's brilliant. I know it was written 10 years ago, but do consider some kind of sequel... it's just too lovely 3

This is awesome... I loved it... But you sure made Misty
Weak... But it is good... All AAML scenes are too cute...

So cute! I like how Misty was having such a good time just talking with Ash that she forgot all about her fear which was very cute

Well, I'm about 10 years late to the party, but better late than never,

I didn't expect to like this fic. I thought it would be too lighthearted, too friendly, too "first-person POV" to be worth a read. However, when I did start it, I found those aspects of it to be very refreshing, and as the story unfolded, they worked well with the surprising twist partway through.

It's a fun little fic and definitely worth the read. Excellent shipping.

Sweet and well written :)

This is first person POV done right.

Thank you for shareing the Story. Thank you.

I've enjoyed the first part. I'm now going for the next ones. Man, what Ash did was cruel! If I was Misty I would have already killed him! :)

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

I love it! Describes Ash and Misty near perfectly (because nothings perfect). Ash's mini-backstory-majiggers were cute too. He's so clumsy, in an endearingly adorable way. 3 ~Har~

Amazing story.

One thing I didn't get, why did they not use their pokemon to get out?

Amazing story.

One thing I didn't get, why did they not use their pokemon to get out?

I just found this story, and I must say it's absolutely -awesome-. I've been a Pokéshipper for ages and I haven't read one story that's half as perfectly in-character as this one. It's funny, heart-warming, and I could imagine everything playing out just perfectly like that. Even Team Rocket's part, ha! Very nice. :3