|Reviews for Blackbird Fly|
| AngelsLuvMe chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
PLZ update soon! Luv the story! :)
| Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
great story! its very interesting but who is jim? if he wasnt an abusive boyfriend was he a step dad? or something similar? -shrugs- u wont tell me anyway so y am i even asking? oh well i shall wait for the next update. which should be soon right? 0] BYE!
| YankeeDiva chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
I like this story its fast paced and has a great flow. I cant wait to see where you go with it.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
The re-introduction of this is causing me to take a better look at the gang..
| PsychoBeachGirl88 chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
This is a great story, I love it :) I'm interested in finding out what exactly happened to Bella. I can't wait for more!
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
ooh i love this already, so unique. you portray the characters in a new light. so what happened to the original blackbird fly? i can't even remember what it was about, was it similar to this one? great job and can't wait for the next update!
| October25 chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
Another great chapter. I just wanted to pass along something I learned in my Creative Writing class I can't remember what the term is but its slowing down the story add more words extra stuff to put between all the important factors. I hope thats okay I think you already sort of do this but with dialogue.
| October25 chapter 2 . 1/15/2010
You write well, and I saw what you said about reviews so I'll do my best:) “My bedroom’s pretty cleared out" you should maybe but much after pretty is that considered critiquing I hope so. And maybe put a bit more of thoughts besides description to add to the dialogue. I hope that this isn't considered mean. It's a great story though because I'm pretty I've already read this.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
This repost is real isn't it? Please tell me I'm not dreaming..
Thank you very much for this opportunity to read one of my favs..
Off to chap 2...
| PLV chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
Loved the story the first time I read it.
I am pleased to see it reposted.