Reviews for Blackbird Fly
luv4jake chapter 28 . 6/29/2010
Omg I'm scared for Bella damn this shit is going down I didn't expect this toward the end you are really surprising me with this!
luv4jake chapter 27 . 6/29/2010
Omg I feel like I just cut some onions because my eyes are still watering from reading this chapter. I thought if she was going to have a miscarriage it would have been at the beginning but you made it realistic bravo. Doesn't mean it didn't hurt like hell to read. Poor Bella but at least she knows what those monsters have done to her. I hope Vicky never gets out and Jim should die in prison fucking asshole. I'm sorry you have this goodie bag of horrors to pull from I wouldn't wish this shit on my worst enemy. Until next time my lady keep up the good work. Omg we are heading towards the end already yikes!
luv4jake chapter 26 . 6/29/2010
Whoa! Until next time!
luv4jake chapter 25 . 6/29/2010
Another quick chapter. It is creepy when your dad starts dating again. Then they want to talk about well my dad does. Until next time I'm digging the progression and Charlie's demands lol!
luv4jake chapter 24 . 6/29/2010
Another quick read I got caught up them when I looked up it was over. They are getting somewhere yay!
luv4jake chapter 23 . 6/29/2010
This was a fast chapter to read but Rose has some legit concerns but maybe she could have spoken to Edward privately another time. I love How Jasper was like we out and Edward seconded it. Em is so cool only he has to pay dearly for blowing the pregnancy which was too funny!
luv4jake chapter 22 . 6/29/2010
"Can you two get any more gag-worthy?" Charlie asked. "Are you ready to go to La Bella Italia, Bella?" His idea of a joke.

"Step throat of the vagina!" Alice snickered. She was a little more smashed than I thought.

Until next time!
luv4jake chapter 21 . 6/29/2010
"I don't want to expose you to my morning breath," he said, getting out his toothbrush and toothpaste.

"Angela wasn't kidding," I said. "Can we try again tomorrow?"

He picked up my hair and kissed it. "If you're feeling better, I'd love to," he said.

Yay until next time!
luv4jake chapter 20 . 6/29/2010
"What kind of car is this?" I asked.

"A Bentley," Ted said.

"Why does that name sound familiar?"

"Because rappers like these cars a lot," Ted admitted. "I liked them before rappers did. This one was my present to myself when I retired."

"It's pretty."

"Bella doesn't know much about exotic cars," Edward explained.

"Hey, now!"

Edward and Ted laughed.

"Quaint? Yeah, there are no signs out," Edward admitted. "The city has an ordinance to keep large signs from being posted. You have to know where something is, you can't rely on seeing it from the car- aw man, the Arcade closed!"

"Have they threatened to break plates and yell 'Opa' yet?"

"You know it."

"Because everybody wants to be Greek," Ted and Edward said together in perfect Greek accents. I smiled.

Edward and Ted are talking about colonoscopies and blood sugar levels," I said.

"Oh, I know," she said. "Nothing is disgusting once you've been through medical school."

She's a laugh riot," Edward said. "She means well. She's crazy about Emmett."

"They're kindred spirits," Liz said.

"That's because they've both got ADD," Edward corrected.

OMG I don't like for my food to touch either! If I could just take one bite of each thing on my plate… the juice from the gravy was blending into the yams. The yams were ruined, now. My food couldn't touch if I was going to eat it.

This is some real talk: "No good can come through a mystery," Dad said.

Those were my favorite parts. Until next time!
luv4jake chapter 19 . 6/28/2010
"I'd rather have you throwing yourself at me."

"Good, you're doped up and don't have any clothes on, so I can have my way with you," he said. He was back in a good mood. I smiled, relieved.

She must have been molested that bastard. I was trying to hold out hope! Damn! Until next time.
luv4jake chapter 18 . 6/28/2010
"Please, Edward, don't hate me for this," I muttered.


How was I ever going to get my homework done, now, when I could do for myself? Why I had waited so long?

Oh Bella you breaking out of your box yay! Those were my favorite parts once again. Until next time.
luv4jake chapter 17 . 6/28/2010
"Wow!" he cried before saying anything else. "Is this really an Aston-Martin?"

"What's the big deal about an Aston-Martin?" I asked, getting out of the car before Edward could come around to let me out.

"Yes, it's an Aston-Martin," Edward said, helping me out the rest of the way. "My Dad collects cars, this was my graduation present when I got out of medical school and got an internship in Seattle."

"Whoa," Charlie muttered. "Hi, Bells."

"I was wondering when you were going to say hello to me," I said, smiling. He stopped and hugged and kissed me.

"You drive this around Seattle?" Charlie asked.

"Yes, I have to be careful," Edward admitted. "I usually keep it in my building's parking lot. Do you want to take it for a spin?"

"Would I?" Charlie cried. Edward held out the keys and there was a gleam in Charlie's eyes like a little kid.

"I think you just made a friend for life," I said as Charlie hopped into the car, zipping out of the driveway.

"I forgot to get our bags out."

"He'll be back… eventually," I said. "Come on, let's not stand out in the rain."

"Oh, that's okay, you're running on Jacob time."

"You're embarrassing the living hell out of me," I said. "Show me that trick with the banana."

Those were my favorite parts. I'm Team Charlie!
luv4jake chapter 16 . 6/28/2010
"Well…" the song Blackbird popped into my head. Renée's favorite song had been Blackbird. "Can you play the song Blackbird? The one by the Beatles?"

"That was my mother's favorite song," I said quietly, wiping my face with the back of one of my hands. "Play something else."

"I wrote it for you," he said. Something inside me broke, a little bit- but not in a bad way. I felt uplifted, like a hard outer shell was breaking and a newly healed, yet tender, pink center inside me was rising out. "About you."

"Hey, I'm just trying to get in your pants," Edward replied. I gasped. He began to laugh. "I'm just kidding, Bella. I just felt bad over your ruined camera."

He laughed. "I thought we were going to take this slow," he said. "You're actually pretty funny when you catch me off guard. It's cute."

We're not moving these books until you thumb through them," Jasper replied. "You can't seriously think you're going to coast through your first time without a little homework first, do you?"

"I'm a hands-on learner," I said proudly. What a quick, snappy comeback!

"Then you should get some batteries, Bella," Alice said entering from the bathroom, her hair wet, a wicked grin on her face. She snickered wickedly.

My favorite parts until next time!
luv4jake chapter 15 . 6/28/2010
I would have died if Charlie had tried to talk to me about sex.

"Well, yeah," Alice said. "How long did you and Jake wait?"

"Three years!" Angela cried. "How soon did you and Jasper wait?"

"The second date," Alice said. Angela gasped. "O-kay! We came here to talk to Bella about the shower she took with Edward last night."

"Slut!" Angela cried gleefully.

"It's pretty daring to shower together so early," Angela said. "Jake and I didn't shower together until we had been sleeping together for a year!"

"But don't try to have sex standing up in the shower," Alice said. "Unless you can take it bent over. It's already really slippery with all the soap and shampoo and conditioner."

Wendi began to cry. Angela got up to take Wendi back. "Well, once you get used to it, you'll want to," she said. She was talking about sex like it was recipe for baking cookies for Will's preschool class.

My friends were perverts!

"Alright," Alice said. "Let us know when you actually have taken the plunge. Until then, just take the vibrator back into your room and practice."

"I'm not going to use it," I said, defensively. The idea of masturbation seemed so ritualistically wrong to me.

"Sure," she said, smugly. "We'll see after a few more showers."

Omg I had a conversation with my friends last year the shit was so embarrassing but fun! Until the next time those were my favorite parts.
luv4jake chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
I didn't trust myself to give her a sponge bath- no way.

Like any man, a completely inappropriate vision, like something out of a porno (that Jasper would not appreciate one bit) flashed through my head before I forced it out.

"I don't know if I'm going to be able to do the rest of you, Bella," I said, feeling a bit stupid. "I'm going to lose control. You might want to do the rest of this."

"Alright," she said, turning around. She kneeled to pick up the soap, and I couldn't help but see her ass- it wasn't so bony to me, now. She was beautiful. Amazing. It was an ass I wanted to cup, to smack, to bend her over. No, I had already messed up enough, tonight.

How ridiculous were we? I just wanted to pick her up and slam her onto her bed and start making loud, painful love to her without asking her, but I knew that bordered on being completely wrong.

"Just tell her the truth, then," I said, dressing her. "There's no shame in the truth."

Those were my favorite parts. I did recommend this on twitter today!
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