Reviews for my world your world
Fleur50 chapter 8 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 7 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 6 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 5 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 4 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 3 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 2 . 4/8
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 4/8
Bon d├ępart!
sholtsclaw698 chapter 15 . 3/20
if you aren't ready to say no to another guy, then you are not in love. if bella was able to have sex/ let some guy go down on her and her go down on him, then she is not really in love with edward.

if you are in love with someone, you don't need to date another person to see if its really love or not.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
I love your fanfic! I just wanted to say though that as long as you haven't been baptized yet you can't be shunned. So if Edward decided to be secular after Rumspringa and he hasn't been baptized he wouldn't be shunned.
Just take this as constructive critisism.
IsabellaMarie31 chapter 25 . 5/4/2015
I loved the story and I can't wait for the sequel, but I would like to see more of a Amish Bells and a little more of hot and sexy Edward. Jajaja
Guest chapter 4 . 3/5/2015
I can feel the pressure if their differences brewing. Great foreshadowing.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
Oh. So, so sweet. I hand little butterflies in my stomach from that sweet kiss. Well done!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2015
I simply love this meeting of two worlds!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Love this premis. So original. I think in going g to love this story.
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