|Reviews for Penance|
| sniffle chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
| Piceron chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Short, but angst-ridden. Not a wasted word in the story. Well done.
| Sierra-de-Lafayette chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Awesome! I've always been surprised at the lack of people who elaborate on Zevran's backstory. This was really good, although if you start a story on Zevran's last mission, I would definitely not mind! _
| Midnight Strike chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I'm usually not big on Zev fics, but I liked this one a lot. He is a more complicated character, and this little snippet captured it very well.
| NoviceFanFic chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Very well written. My heart sank and sank and sank. I know it sounds strange but thank you for the heart sinking. It's nice to see writing that really captures the emotion and takes you on the rollercoaster with it.
| Naela chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Oh god, like I said, the Zevran angst is killing me.
The add perspective on Rinna's death really makes the moment seem a lot less "huh" for me too. I've always found what Zevran did unusually cruel whenever he explained his last mission.
And of course I love the way you write prose! Beautiful complicated sentences, I wanna eat them.
| Sagacious Rage chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Oh, the angst! But so good. I like the sparseness of the language, almost as if he didn't want to think about it and was trying not to? Or something? Brevity is good.