Reviews for Burn
REDBALLON chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
What an awesome awe inspiring story.
phoebelicious chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
That was breathtakingly beautiful. I didn't want it to end.
thedownbeat chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
The best one-shot for this contest that I have read.
Cleargirl chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
That was truly beautiful.
onesweetbell chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Congrats on the win. I liked your story, it was one I voted for
readerkitty chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I loved this gorgeous evocative story. Just Beautiful, thankyou.
BLilTXgirl chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

You are such an amazing writer and I always enjoy reading what you post.
kelysuperficial chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Wow, beautiful. UNexpected and beautiful.
pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
This was truly touching, blissful & beautifully written.

Thanks so much for sharing it.
pilotnana chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
truly you
letmesign chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I'm so thrilled with this. Just so you know, I'm reviewing as I go, but already, I'm in love.


"It was an unholy contrast, bringing angels to Hell" - just gorgeous, this line.


I adore the scene where he writes the letter. I can picture him scribbling quickly, spilling his guts with paper and pen. It's a lovely image with him spattered in ink, his face hopeful, his heart knowing how much he wants to try to really live again.

There meeting is so shy and sweet, everything it should be. I love that you've written this for the time period it's set in, and not tried to make it porn-ish or anything. It fits with when it's set, and I love that.

As you mentioned in your author's note, I do love that you have chosen to go for third person narrative and limited dialogue. I think it works really well for this story, and I love that you thought this out and didn't just sit down and write like a fiend, which is sometimes tempting (hell, I do it).

Wonderful entry, T. Thank you for sharing.
Babette12 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Oh, Tiff, you know I love everything you do! This is no exception. I'm always amazed at the amount of emotion and heart you are able to convey. The sex is great, but it's the emotion that makes it wonderful.

Good luck with the contest! xoxo!
shayna.lane chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
its beautiful...
Taz65 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Another beautiful story. The characters were so understated but their depth of feeling so powerful. My heart ached for Edward while at war and I felt joy and apprehension when he reached out to Bella not knowing how he would be received but going forward anyway. Bella's cautious acceptance spoke of her understanding the need for propriety but having already learned how short life can be didn't want to miss an opportunity to connect with someone who clearly had been thinking of her. Their bravery to embrace life and its possibilities instead of simply accepting the life they were currently existing in was quietly inspiring.
robee chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Great job! I don't think you needed the dialogue that some of the readers requested. You did a beautiful job of telling Edward and Bella's story without it. Some writers use dialogue as part of their story line, to help move thier story along. Sometime I feel it is over used. You did not need it, nor did you need to explain it. Your story did it for you. I enjoyed it very much, thank you.
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