|Reviews for Naruto One Man Team|
| Zecht chapter 33 . 3/7
holy hell, you are back! Believe it or not, but it was this fic that made me addicted to fanfiction almost 2 years ago. So glad you continued this story!
| Ser Serendipity chapter 2 . 3/4
If you have abandoned this story, good for you.
Perhaps someday you can return with something worth reading?
| Ser Serendipity chapter 1 . 3/4
Y'know... I came here to flame this story.
I've heard tales of its horrors spread across the web, and I wanted to see if the Lovecraftian mutterings were true. If someone TRULY could create something SO BAD that entire forum threads were devoted to making fun of it.
I came here expecting burning babies. I came here expecting neutered Sasuke's. I came here expecting shrill Sakura's, hopelessly dull Hinata's, retarded village councils, unforgivably slow Sandaime's, and a hundred other tics of the fanon that drive me to attempt to scale the invisible wall that separates all internet goers in a desperate bid to strangle the author on the other side for being THAT DUMB.
Little did I know... you were ready for me.
For the truth is, how am I supposed to lambast a story if I can't read it in the first place?
These walls of text. They are beautiful in their simplicity.
You knew I was coming... and so you fortified yourself. You rearranged: you cut, you pasted.
You created a maze, a brick wall, an intractable block of words. And just like it's near-impossible to count the number of bricks in a single wall unless you're willing to devote your whole self to it, I am unable to make heads or tails of 90% of the sentences in this story, so grouped together as they are.
I admire your dedication. You made your story COMPLETELY UNREADABLE just to keep out people like me. That kind of devotion... I wish I were capable of such acts.
It's the only explanation.
Unless, of course, you're just a terrible writer, and don't understand what a paragraph is.
But surely it couldn't be that simple... right?
| HH Enthusiast chapter 33 . 2/27
Pet Peeves...unfinished fics...T-T I miss you...
| Doommeister chapter 33 . 2/28
Excellent story. Have read it through several times. No idea why you haven't updated unless its that dreaded writers block. Please update ASAP
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/24
Question. Are 98% of the people in this fic rapist? Even with these being 'hard core' ninjas it seems to come up a lot, from everyone.
Why would you twist canon characters, many of whom had no inclination toward it, into rape enthusiasts?
| Siggimondo chapter 33 . 2/26
Finally some dismemberment D
| Chozan's Cell chapter 8 . 2/22
This has to be the dumbest, childish, pointless petty, and most pitiful thing I have ever read.
There is so much wrong with this fic, on so many levels that I couldn't begin to list them all.
I'd normally log in to give a review like this, but I think even you have walked away from this mess, and I don't feel like bothering.
| Siggimondo chapter 30 . 2/24
Man, that was cold.
Ice puns ftw XD
| Siggimondo chapter 29 . 2/24
| Siggimondo chapter 28 . 2/24
JUSTICE, AND THE PROMISE OF JUSTICE, AT LAST!
| Siggimondo chapter 27 . 2/24
That last sentence.
So fucking poetic.
Manly tears were shed.
| Siggimondo chapter 26 . 2/24
You almost had me there. Quite the devious little happy ending if I may say so myself.
| Siggimondo chapter 24 . 2/24
I think it's a miracle that he isn't FUBAR, let alone that he seems to be a somewhat functional human being.
You've really driven home how fucked, both literally and metaphorically, up to this point, and by the looks of it there might be more.
I applaud you for giving just enough information while leaving enough to the reader's imagination.
| Siggimondo chapter 23 . 2/24
I do not always get emotional over fan fiction, but when I do, I give my compliments to the author.