Reviews for Naruto One Man Team
corjca1 chapter 5 . 10/9
leave the howler monkey slut kibba dogs cock sucker and the fag emo buttboy himself to die
corjca1 chapter 2 . 10/9
dog breath getting nuted
corjca1 chapter 1 . 10/9
theres the real demons do those abominations think there going to heaven get a grip your sinned against an inocent child hell is waiting for thee
Lewito chapter 16 . 10/9
at this point this look more like hinata x haku just those two
Ethan Rhodes chapter 14 . 9/24
\"Y-you bitch!" Unkei coughed out right before he threw up on the arena floor./

When i read this bit my dog went from relax to straight up alert like he heard something only he could hear lol
ThatoneguyC chapter 17 . 9/11
So that was stupid. If you made naruto smart why the hell would he give him a free shot or take on three other people. You made him way too cocky, and everyone would reprimand him for that and he would get promoted. They would compare him to sasuke for that.
Exargna chapter 7 . 8/7
Sasuke's hyperbolization and deterioration of his character are annoying. Sakura has become the worst version of herself. Author what is your problem? Sasuke was arrogant in the canon, but he was not such a terrible freak, he had a normal interaction with the team, and even after escaping from Orochimaru, he created his own team... I like it when the characters are pressed into their cons with their faces, but I hate it when the characters turn into their worst side.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/22
Finally someone tells her to her face that she is a cowardly bitch. She isn’t worthy of being hokage in any way shape or form and whoever even suggested her name should be jailed for treason against konoha.
bill4994 chapter 15 . 7/15
Excellent chapter ! Good to see some A-holes getting their just desserts at last.
bill4994 chapter 14 . 7/15
Good chapter. Lots pf humor and some good character interaction. Keep up the good work.
bill4994 chapter 13 . 7/15
Gooe chapter but 1 mistake in the first sentense you said teams 8 & 10 not 8 & 11 . Still a good read. Major bummer with team 7 making the pass.
bill4994 chapter 12 . 7/15
Good chapter. nice work on the prep to the exams through the first,and into the fight with the Kumo teams and execution and the mental stress suffered by the trauma of first kill at face to face and looking as their life fades away.
bill4994 chapter 11 . 7/15
Exceptionally well written chapter ! Well thought out plan and wise advice to be wary of possible threats,how to respond,and to be aware of spies. Keep up the great work !
bill4994 chapter 9 . 7/13
Good chapter but as a former veteran I find such actions deserve immediate and severe
punishment.
bill4994 chapter 7 . 7/13
Wonderful end to the mission. Looking to see Haku and Hinata react to each other. Keep up the good work !
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