holy hell, you are back! Believe it or not, but it was this fic that made me addicted to fanfiction almost 2 years ago. So glad you continued this story!

Hmm...

That said.

If you have abandoned this story, good for you.

Perhaps someday you can return with something worth reading?

Y'know... I came here to flame this story.

I've heard tales of its horrors spread across the web, and I wanted to see if the Lovecraftian mutterings were true. If someone TRULY could create something SO BAD that entire forum threads were devoted to making fun of it.

I came here expecting burning babies. I came here expecting neutered Sasuke's. I came here expecting shrill Sakura's, hopelessly dull Hinata's, retarded village councils, unforgivably slow Sandaime's, and a hundred other tics of the fanon that drive me to attempt to scale the invisible wall that separates all internet goers in a desperate bid to strangle the author on the other side for being THAT DUMB.

Little did I know... you were ready for me.

For the truth is, how am I supposed to lambast a story if I can't read it in the first place?

These walls of text. They are beautiful in their simplicity.

You knew I was coming... and so you fortified yourself. You rearranged: you cut, you pasted.

You created a maze, a brick wall, an intractable block of words. And just like it's near-impossible to count the number of bricks in a single wall unless you're willing to devote your whole self to it, I am unable to make heads or tails of 90% of the sentences in this story, so grouped together as they are.

I admire your dedication. You made your story COMPLETELY UNREADABLE just to keep out people like me. That kind of devotion... I wish I were capable of such acts.

It's the only explanation.

Unless, of course, you're just a terrible writer, and don't understand what a paragraph is.

But surely it couldn't be that simple... right?

Pet Peeves...unfinished fics...T-T I miss you...

Excellent story. Have read it through several times. No idea why you haven't updated unless its that dreaded writers block. Please update ASAP

Question. Are 98% of the people in this fic rapist? Even with these being 'hard core' ninjas it seems to come up a lot, from everyone.

Why would you twist canon characters, many of whom had no inclination toward it, into rape enthusiasts?

Finally some dismemberment D

This has to be the dumbest, childish, pointless petty, and most pitiful thing I have ever read.

There is so much wrong with this fic, on so many levels that I couldn't begin to list them all.

I'd normally log in to give a review like this, but I think even you have walked away from this mess, and I don't feel like bothering.

Man, that was cold.

Ice puns ftw XD

Justice... yet...

UUUUCHIIIHAAAAAAA SAAAASUKEEEEE!

JUSTICE, AND THE PROMISE OF JUSTICE, AT LAST!

That last sentence.

So fucking poetic.

Manly tears were shed.

You almost had me there. Quite the devious little happy ending if I may say so myself.

Wow.

I think it's a miracle that he isn't FUBAR, let alone that he seems to be a somewhat functional human being.

You've really driven home how fucked, both literally and metaphorically, up to this point, and by the looks of it there might be more.

I applaud you for giving just enough information while leaving enough to the reader's imagination.

That BITCH!

I do not always get emotional over fan fiction, but when I do, I give my compliments to the author.

Good story.