when Naruto had be his own team and his took the same D ranks jobs like get cans and others stuff now, his had made his clones and his had others like on the farm job and his made it good it now, when had then now, money be put into a money box now, when his had save up money now, some time his past the Chunuin rank now, his get his clan home now, and money too, when his had was some gust house moon lights his open the bounty huther co fox fire nights no go , when his siting into his office Naruto took on some jobs took out SS class and S class and others now, were Naruto had keeping gold bars now, his had 3 big black bags now, full of money now, his had keeping on the wall his former Jump suit into a glass care , when his fighters vs others now,

Great read

I just finished reading your story, and I absolutely loved it! I read it with so much interest and excitement. I’d love to make it even more engaging by turning it into a comic. I also have some ideas that I’d like to share with you, and I hope you'll like them!
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Ama!

I wish for once that one of these authors would have the balls to turn the Uchiha into a stocking horse, when he pulls a despicable stunt like he did in this story.

I genuinely hope that Naruto's kid from that learns who their father is, realizes they're an Uzumaki, and dumps their pedo-rapist mother like the flaming dog poop she is.

NOOOOOO FINISH IT PLEASE!

How the hell are there 12 or 13 year olds raping eachother

Gave this a read to the end just to see how it would turn. And yes I know it hasn't been updated in 12 years but oh well.

This entire story just felt like an psychopath's utopia. So many people were utterly ridiculously over-antagonistic it's kinda insane. When Ibiki Morino, a torture and interrogation specialist, is one of the top 5-10 characters in terms of empathy and compassion in your entire story, it just feels too much. Even in canon, there were plenty of people who showed support to Naruto, not all at first, but slowly as he made a name for himself starting with the Land of Waves mission. Here, it just seems like every person is a puppet on a string preprogrammed to hate him as much as possible without any recourse. Anko, Kurenai, Kakashi, Tsunade, all of them acted perfectly fine towards Naruto in canon but you had them do despicable acts one way of another here. Tsunade was an utter reprehensible bitch in this story.

Not to mention all the doctors being allowed to do that to a patient and yet still no repercussions. It just felt like adding more and more angst just to see if you can. 33 chapters later, and 1 person out of hundreds has been punished for their crimes against Naruto. Unsatisfying.

I personally think the Sound Four are kind of flat but it’s nice to see Hinata work with her cousin.

I'm not sure what the point of nerfing Kurenai like this is. Sure she wasn't exactly the strongest person shown but she was still a Jonin sensei. You making her so bad at taijutsu she has to use the academy style, not knowing any jutsu besides genjutsus, and getting exhausted after using 3 genjutsu is just baffling. Your story's kurenai should barely be a chunin let alone a Jonin from what you're making her out to be. Literally you have Kiba with better stats and feats than Kurenai does, I just don't see the point

"Sure, Naruto didn't like the teme, but he had at least trusted him enough to not try to kill someone in cold blood" Dude he's don't that like 6 times up until this one with Haku. Like 2 of them were on Naruto as well, idk why he'd even think this

Why didn't Naruto tell the Hokage about Danzo's root? He gets send on a highly confidential S rank mission only him and Sarutobi should know then is intercepted by what he knew were fake anbu. Said fake anbu attacked him to bring him to "Danzo-sama" in the middle of said mission and yet Naruto didn't think a single time to mention it after he finished the mission. What gives with that

Update

Я столько времени потратил на этот ебаный бред. Самая кончанная работа из всех, что я логики и мозгов у персонажей не большем у курицы.

Я прочитал 28 глав и когда уже расероют кто его родили ли в каждой главе одно и тоже просто скопировал с предыдущий учиха то ичиха сё он должен получить он учиха бесит. Сюжет превратился в кал полный