LoveRob chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Okay, so to start the storyline has promise. You have something that could be developed into something really good. However, the spelling mistakes and bad grammar are going to lose you readers. Do yourself a favour look for a beta. They will help with all the spelling and grammar stuff without detracting from your story.

Hope the feedback was useful and you do not take offence.

Guest chapter 23 . 3/13/2013
Missed a whole chapter! The most important one! where'd it go?! Put it up?
Guest chapter 23 . 3/2/2013
Totally just skipped a chapter! And it was like the most important one! I can make sense of what happened, but I would love to read it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Wtf if 4 adults y rated t
myhubbyissoedward chapter 14 . 2/28/2013
awe shit Mike is going to flip and poor Edward!
GinaMarie1996 chapter 7 . 1/29/2012
Good book.
sarahlouise80 chapter 7 . 12/26/2010
awesome story love she chooses soon
haleyscott305 chapter 7 . 8/29/2010
loved it..

please update super sooon!
chevy09 chapter 7 . 6/3/2010
eager to know what will happened if bella has to choose. any chance for you to continue the story. like to see it until the end.
Twilight's evil Pixie chapter 7 . 5/31/2010
i am really loving this. Contiue!
daddiesdarlingangel chapter 7 . 4/28/2010
This is a really good plot line. I lobe your writing when are you posting another chapter I totally want to know what's going to happen

alyss rose
VV chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
it wa acually quite vauge. and cliche. it went to fast, and it didnt even really sound like what we would do...;)
fancastride chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Ah,yea that was one hot chapter!
Masochistic princess chapter 7 . 2/27/2010
Great story you so need to update this
kaitebug chapter 7 . 2/14/2010
This is a good story. Alittle hard to read but stil okay
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