|Reviews for The Magic Bullet Murder Case|
| Aky Ivanov chapter 10 . 8/19/2019
I arrived here too! * *
You are really very good, this one so far is the one I liked the most, for your skill in interweaving the story with the previous one (the coin with which Kaito plays, brilliant). And then, you gave space to Saguru! I love him too much as a friend of Kaito, and seeing him worried about Kaito made me too happy.
I admit I was surprised at the performance of sleeping Saguru, and I was hoping for a direct confrontation between the two detectives on the evidence gathered on Kaito's account ... but it does nothing!
But Conan's indecision on revealing Kaito Kid's true identity was very touching.
The characters were well characterized and even the murder was well done, my little heart broke from the wickedness given to Kaito's father by the victim: '(
Well done, good, good!
Another story added to my favorites!
Ps: Sorry for my English,
| Mystic 777 chapter 10 . 2/28/2019
I don't know that you need practice writing mysteries, I'd rather have a story where I'm given the same clues as the detective. I feel it is a little cheap to pull (may I not be murdered by Holmes fans) what Doyle has by having Holmes get most of the clues off scene. I much prefer your way. Thanks for sharing your story.
| HeadphonesGal chapter 10 . 4/22/2018
Just lovely, great work! The new relationship Ran and Conan have makes me so happy.
| CharmGirlLove chapter 2 . 12/4/2017
Oh man these never get old. :) always a good reread and gives me ideas for stories (That I probably will never write oh well.)
| MazerMooso chapter 10 . 11/6/2017
this story was Amazing! I loved it! It's written so good!
| GhostAnn chapter 10 . 11/3/2017
I like how you write Kaito. Its just so fun and he's such a jerk but still lovable. Your guys dipictions of all the characters is really amazing actually.
I do have to agree that something feels off... maybe its that Ran didn't even think of calling her dad... but that is only a little thing that could be explained by the fact that they already called the cops... Akakos presence feels forced in a lot of ways... but maybe I was just waiting for it to dawn on her that half the trouble she was trying so hard to avoid was being caused by her own actions.
I had fun guessing what was going on a who done it. I am really liking these storys. The last one had me laughing out loud and worried beyond reason with the blood bucket... but I was so wrapped up in the story I couldn't come up with a review before I was jumping to the sequel.
I was not disappointed with it eather... it just seems that the pacing a bit off other than that... I'm going to get some sleep than try and look to see if the next story is up... I haven't looked at when these were written...
| Wragziez chapter 10 . 3/23/2017
| Alyss Penedo chapter 6 . 10/18/2016
Wait, wait, wait. I remember Kaito being confused about the tag-teaming between Ran and Kudo from the last time I (re)read this, but he doesn't even know that Ran knows? Doesn't Kid address Conan as 'Kudo' in front of her when he left tiny-tantei in her care during that whole mess with Psycho-sensei? I could've sworn...
| CharmGirlLove chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
XD teaching Hakuba concept of human interactions. That still freaking cracks me up!
| Kneoria chapter 10 . 10/23/2015
Thats utterly hilarious. The bit about Kaito impersonating the lead singer I mean. and poor conan. He's so conflicted on what to do!
| armysugakookie chapter 2 . 9/17/2015
Why did Aoko say "thief boy" when referring Kaito?
| MayContainHyjinks chapter 10 . 9/2/2015
Ok, just finished chapter six
Here's my current Theory. Junko steals/borrows Kaitos magic gun thing and then at the Kung Fu/martials arts competition she sets up the gun-opendoor-shootherbrother contraption. Becuase it originally was owned by Kaito, he gets arrested for it (wether thats intential or not i'm not sure...) Now, a sub theory of that is Mean Older Brother set the trap himself and "Magic-bulleted" himself... though I find that doubtful... The only other possible suspect I can think of is the Teacher that got told off by Mean Older Brother.
back to the story :D
oook...post chapter 6
Hmm, rubs chin thoughtfully...Aoko could have set everything up before hand...and the insult was..icing on the cake so to speak. I must congratulate you guys on making this A) a very plauseable cannon feeling story and B) IT CAN BE ANYONE /wails and pulls on hair! First i think its junko then the sensei...and those two are maybe's...its a mystery what the "witch" is doing in this whole mess... I really hope its not Aoko. /Sigh..back to what ifs and who knows and hmms's btw...that "detective" is an idiot... or at least not a very smart one for not thinking outside the box
1) ok, who's running this investigation here, the detective or the suspects haha (Chapter 7)
2)Hakuba, bwhahahaha so you're furious cus you got upstaged and your thief is getting himself arrested hahahaha (Chapter 8)
3) wait wait what...enslave Kaito to her will...Akako what in the world are you babbling about?(Chapter 8)
4)...huuuuh Conan...what did you figure out (chapter 8)
5) Hoshizuki's part...the heck? Is he a bribed officer or something? (chapter 9)
6) SEQUEL? (chapter 9)
7) Smooth Conan real smooth hahahahahaha (chapter 10, Hakuba falling asleep)
8) hold on a cotton picking minute...junko and sensei working together? - new theory that popped up while Hakuba was asleep (Chapter 10)
9)...wait wait wait huuuuuuuuuh!? In love with Sensei? (chapter 10)
Well, in my opinion, for the hardest genre to write. You guys did fine. The thing i've noticed about mystery's is that the fascinating part is typically the "how" and not the always the "who and why". Try looking up the book series "Encyclopedia Brown" and you'll see what I mean.
In the mean time I'm off to go watch a heist..a haywire heist..(wacks brain..that was a horrible pun!)
| majishan chapter 10 . 8/4/2015
i've always loved Kaito/shinichi interactions. that shinichi discovered kaito's secret (by accident no less) was perfect
| armysugakookie chapter 10 . 6/20/2015
Though I wished for more...
| armysugakookie chapter 8 . 6/20/2015
oh shit just got real!