|Reviews for Tokens of Affection|
| Star Crossed Writer chapter 7 . 7/19
I really liked the message in this chapter - it does what I think every good story needs to do. It reminds the reader of a little piece of wisdom or moral that we knew all along, but sometimes need a story to understand! It makes me question what the message of my story is ... Lol. XD Anyway, I can see why this chapter was one of your favorites!
Thank you so much for your review, BTW! When I read "you are a terrible person" I was like "Oh great, who'd I offend this time?". But then you turned it around and had me blushing! XD next chapter will be up either Thursday or Friday... Hope you enjoy it when it gets here!
| Star Crossed Writer chapter 2 . 7/17
Wow. I mean... Jeez. You went straight for the feels and didn't hold back. I just... Wow. Need a moment. This chapter hit me a little too deeply than I think it should have.
Good writing, friend. Good writing, indeed.
| Star Crossed Writer chapter 1 . 7/17
I actually love this - its so clever and subtle! And I'm learning so much about the language of flora! XD
I enjoy your take on Jareth's view of the Labyrinth (the booming business of babies) and Sarah's likewise connection with goblins. The creativity and life in your writing is easy to see just within this first chapter - I'm so glad you decided to make it a multi-chapter story! For instance, the flowers (and their personifications under Jareth's magic) are vivid - I can practically see a small garden accumulating on Sarah's vanity. And there is so much back story hinting! Kevin's family struggles, Jareth's past struggles, the runners' personal lives... It all made for a very good hook chapter. How will the two react when they first face each other, face to face, I wonder?
And... Yeah, I know I'm not supposed to do this, but what the hell? I'd love it if you read the first chapter of my Labyrinth fic 'Deal' and told me what you thought about it... Its definitely a different take than 'Tokens of Affection', so it may not even be up your alley. But its the first story that I've made such a detailed plan for, and I'd like as many opinions from season Labyrinth writers as possible.
| AliceXxX chapter 15 . 6/24
This story was very enjoyable and the first Labyrinth fanfiction that I've finished reading! Thank you for such a great story! :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/30
Awwwwwwww! So cute!
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/23
This story is absolutely delightful! I read the entire 15 chapters in one day :) The flower language you use is charming, and the character interactions are wonderfully well written. Your dialogue is fantastic, and the entire story flows beautifully. I enjoyed the characters you introduced, and they added richness to the plot and the interactions between the characters. Thank you for sharing this story, and God bless!
| Shiori Kudo chapter 14 . 4/19
How does having the goblins party in Aidan's garden help Sarah's plan?
| GeorgeTobor chapter 15 . 4/4
I am faving it.
Very nice touch with the Flower Language.
Most have no clue it ever existed.
Your fic is not the only one where Sarah has lots of kids.
Cool use of unicorns, having them be Guardian/Judges.
Having a human as the "Bad Guy" ... Ok bad girl, was good too.
So congrats on a great story and thanks for posting it so we could enjoy it too!
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/11
Wow, that was far more enjoyable than I thought it would be... Well done! :3
| Onyx the Shy chapter 15 . 2/11
There will never be a time when I don't LOVE this. I often find myself coming back to it again and again. Thank you for sharing. I dearly love Sarah in this.
| jetboyjetgirl chapter 15 . 2/3
thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters today, thanks! :)
| jetboyjetgirl chapter 3 . 2/3
I'm really loving your fan fic so far! Keep up the good work :)
| Chardinal chapter 15 . 1/14
I enjoyed this extremely, and found the flower language interesting, as well as a nice touch. Thank you for taking time and effort to write this story!
| MBtheDREAMwiz chapter 15 . 1/13
That was a wonderful story and one of the most creative Labrinth fics I have ever read, especially concerning your flower theme! I would also love to read more about some of the in-between scenes! I hope my contribution was to your satisfaction. ;)
| BarbedCaress chapter 15 . 11/24/2014
I don't read Labyrinth fanfic... usually. But I happened on a computer that had this story pulled up on chapter 15, so I read it... and then I went back and read it from chapter 1 on, straight through... non-stop. I couldn't stop reading it, even though I REALLY needed to go to sleep.
You have created the perfect piece of fanfiction. It holds everything to canon, while expanding on the characters, introducing new characters and providing a believable back story.
I can not praise this story highly enough.
Thank you for writing this and thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
I am in awe of your talent!