Reviews for HPSW Episode I: The Chosen One
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 5 . 3h ago
Hmm when dementors got mentioned i exoected the patronus charm. Now im curious what that will do against the dark side
Kingdark chapter 8 . 3/19
Two things that I noticed in your story. First when you write numbers, you should write them in full out words and not in numbers. I think that's even a 'rule' in English spelling and / or grammar but I could be wrong. The second thing is that there is no second thing apparently because I thought confidant was confident but apparently, my spelling counts both as right.

I'm looking forward to how the HP character will change 'known' history.

Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
All tell, no show, and full of forced dialogue, where the only reason the character said that was to further the story.
Liufur chapter 1 . 3/15
The story you mentioned in the notice at the top of chapter1 for some reason has me thinking of Jedi wizard by knighblazer85
Bonhamrules chapter 8 . 3/14
I am so glad you updated! Keep it coming
Jedi seiya 42 chapter 8 . 3/14
like the story hope for more
bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 8 . 3/13
ILikeComps chapter 8 . 3/13
Fun chapter and good that the Harry and crew are teaching new ways to the Jedi. Thanks for sharing!
stars90 chapter 7 . 3/1
You've got a great story going on here. Well-written and well-crafted. Keep it up!
MelkiorShade chapter 7 . 2/4
This is an interesting take on the Star Wars/Harry Pitter crossover. While it is definitely entertaining, and I am thoroughly enjoying it, I find it a little confusing as to how you made Harry a Guardian (which I can understand to an extent), I don't understand how Ron has the emotional qualifications to make a Jedi Shadow. he's not exactly the most patient of people. I can easily see him as Mace's padawan and a potential Battle Master. Could you please explain your reasoning? I can't wait till the next installment.
god of all chapter 7 . 1/31
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
dfcole chapter 7 . 1/19
Awesome stuff! Keep up the great work!
Seawurm chapter 7 . 1/11
I just found this story, and so far I think you have done a great job. I am very impressed, please keep up the great work.
Morbious20 chapter 7 . 1/10
Good chapter , a little disappointed with how much difficulty Harry and Ron had in their fight based on what you've written of how powerful they are.
lackonius chapter 7 . 1/10
Absolutely amazing! I can't wait to see more!
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