Reviews for Milky Clouds
Bonkers4Reid chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
So sad! Most of the death fics I've read (which isn't many) aren't like this. Yours has the dying character not sure what is happening, he's confused and doesn't know he's dying. I kinda like that. I've never been in a near-death situation, but I like your take on this. Too bad Neal had to die for me to enjoy this fic though! lol

By the way, I don't like how you kept using 'they' when he or him would have worked better. They is for plural people!
CapNap chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
That was so good. (: I loved the way you wrote that. It was quite unique and I felt like I was in a fog while I was reading it. Great job!

SeductivelyDeductive13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Sad, but amazing. I love this fic. It really has the feel of death in it. Great job!
Layona chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
I think you are the most evilist, bestest friend in the whole wide world! It was great Padme! :D
ComicalEpiphanies chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Very powerful. I like the mystery and suspense.
Lynda chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Awesome story! Sad and emotional. I love how you described everything from Neal's fading point of view: why would someone have red knees, wet cement, watered-down milk - powerful images!
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
This story was extremely was a very good touching and heartbreaking.

I was glad for the warning before I read it.

Rae37 chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
*sniffles* that was soo sad and I loved it _
Lilly McShepin chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Wonderful story - although I'm not too fond of death fics... they make me far too angsty. :P

Great job. :)