|Reviews for Sensible Creatures|
| Herebedragons66 chapter 25 . 7/12/2011
This is an absolutely beautiful story. Perfect characterization of Loghain (my all-time favorite fictional character), and Kya is lovely. Very, very well done. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
| sapphiretoes chapter 25 . 5/28/2011
I just read this entire story in one go. Loved it! I really enjoyed the flow of your prose and the thoughtful way you described the thoughts and feelings of Kya and Loghain.
| cccfffsss chapter 25 . 5/26/2011
You made me a Loghain fangirl-convert. Of all the fanfic I've read this story is the most riveting and you have captured Loghain's character so well that made his transformation all the more...I think the word I'm looking for is relatable? No. I can't even put to words how powerful this story is. It's a shame the sequel hasn't been updated in almost a year...
| naomis8329 chapter 25 . 5/14/2011
A beautiful bitter sweet story that had me in tears by the end. I do hope that Kya does find lasting love with someone eventually.
I will begin reading the sequel tomorrow in the hope that this be so.
Thank you for a wonderful story and thank you for sharing it with me.
| tgail73 chapter 25 . 10/19/2010
This story was so beautiful! I always adored Loghain and this story made me love him even more. I'm just glad I had tissues handy.
| Metalcraze chapter 14 . 8/13/2010
um wait I assume the phrases Zev used in the game were spanish am i wrong?
And wth does brasca mean anyway?
| Metalcraze chapter 7 . 8/12/2010
I helped a band of cursed werewolves slaughter a clan of Dalish elves. And yes, they will be welcome in the fight, but I think I did it mostly because the elves were rude." best line ever that is the reason my characters did it too
| Antamune chapter 25 . 8/10/2010
I have to say that when I first played through DAO that I absolutely hate Loghain, but then the second time round the story finally began to sink in. I've read the two books, and honestly I have to admit that I really love him as a character now. It's so hard to find an enemy that isn't one of those cape wearing pure evil stereotypes. Loghain has depth, and a soul. I truly enjoyed your story, it broke my heart. Thank you so much for posting it and giving us the opportunity to read it.
| Wynne chapter 14 . 7/5/2010
This fic is near perfect but for the odd typo or word error (like hoard when you meant horde a few chapters back), but the only thing that actually bothered me so far was the incredibly weird appearance of "randomly Italian Zevran." Yeah, I know Antiva is supposed to be an Italian city-state, but Zevran's pronounced Spanish accent suddenly yielding all sorts of Italian phrases in a very short space of time-when he never EVER does so in the game-is just plain desperately weird. It stands out. A lot. Please, please change it.
But other than that, nothing can for a moment take my attention away from the fact that Loghain is unbelievably, perfectly in character, and Kya is a stunningly well-written OC. Normally, I don't bother to read fanfiction past the first few sentences, let alone the first few chapters. This one is one of the best I've seen anywhere, ever, and obviously you have massive dedication, considering how long it's gotten. Thank you for this story, which has thrilled me with its incredible quality.
| Biff McLaughlin chapter 6 . 6/28/2010
Gaak. That's the sound I make (in my head, of course) when I am struck speechless.
| Persephone Chiara chapter 25 . 6/26/2010
That...my God...that was so amazing. I'm stilly misty eyed. Thank you. For writing this, for giving the closure the game never offered.
| Persephone Chiara chapter 6 . 6/26/2010
So beautiful! But I see you haven't updated in a while! Please don't abandon this amazing story!
| DangoDaikazaku chapter 25 . 6/4/2010
ok this was a tear jerker. I loved this story. egads! im bawling! damn it!
| SadameHime chapter 25 . 6/1/2010
I suppose I should talk to you about my serious lack of sleep last night, considering that this story kept me reading from the moment I began the first chapter. I couldn't lay my head to the pillow without reaching the end, and for that, I am actually grateful.
I enjoy stories in which Loghain can be looked at as a human being, not as just a hero, or just the man that is responsible for Cailan's death.
I loved the interactions between them, from the fights to the tender moments, and all the steamy bits in between.
| Shakespira chapter 25 . 4/27/2010
In love, acceptance.
In acceptance, redemption.
In redemption, salvation.
Wonderful, as dark and bitter and sweet as the best chocolate.