Reviews for Double Take
twimima7 chapter 23 . 6/23
What happen! You stopped writing your story? For me it ended in 6/23/17? Hope you will be able to continue this story some day. Please don't give up your writing. Thank you.
twimima7 chapter 19 . 6/23
I believe Bella is right, her dad must still be alive and hiding. Finally, her story unfolds.
twimima7 chapter 11 . 6/21
First I thought it was a dream. Wrong. Good chapter. Your story keeps me on my toes.
twimima7 chapter 10 . 6/21
Why does she have to go back to Edward's? Since she is able to take care of her self.
twimima7 chapter 9 . 6/21
Small world Edward holding his sisters best friend hostage? Boy will she be mad!
twimima7 chapter 3 . 6/21
Poor Bella. She's all alone and no one to help her.
twimima7 chapter 2 . 6/21
What a start. You had me shaking too for Bella hoping someone wold help her. She should have put the knife in his head between the eyes.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/30/2016
So so mean. But I'm loving the story so ty for sharing so far. I hope u will continue and finish it. Thanks again Dee
sandra moore chapter 23 . 5/9/2016
Please update this story! It's been 3 years but it's just so and Edward are just starting out so please start this story again.
jk chapter 7 . 2/18/2016
badass bella is back? REALLY? LOL you write like a fucking child
jk chapter 6 . 2/18/2016
she leaves cause her captur is being sexiest...shes mad about that but not about being fucking kidnapped...the bella you created here is a worthless piece of shit...just saying. if you cant even make the main character likable then you have no business posting fics on this site plus you cant spell for shit
jk chapter 4 . 2/18/2016
that whole scene was fucking stupid as shit...she gets loose and instead of trying to save her own life she cooks...then she runs away from someone that hasn't tried to hurt her...this story is so motherfucking stupid

and its through not threw...and its SILENCE not fucking science...dumbass
jk chapter 2 . 2/18/2016
your spelling is pretty horrible. Stomach not stomic, pool...blood pools not pulls! barely not bearly...jesus what are you 10...cant use your words?
twimima7 chapter 23 . 7/31/2015
Glad they both realize how much they are alike in many ways. Hope they can survive whats ahead of them together. Thanks for the update and your writing.
twimima7 chapter 19 . 7/31/2015
Finally the truth is out and what a story she told. Hope they believe her and help her.
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