Reviews for Double Take
Guest chapter 23 . 7/30
So so mean. But I'm loving the story so ty for sharing so far. I hope u will continue and finish it. Thanks again Dee
sandra moore chapter 23 . 5/9
Please update this story! It's been 3 years but it's just so and Edward are just starting out so please start this story again.
jk chapter 7 . 2/18
badass bella is back? REALLY? LOL you write like a fucking child
jk chapter 6 . 2/18
she leaves cause her captur is being sexiest...shes mad about that but not about being fucking kidnapped...the bella you created here is a worthless piece of shit...just saying. if you cant even make the main character likable then you have no business posting fics on this site plus you cant spell for shit
jk chapter 4 . 2/18
that whole scene was fucking stupid as shit...she gets loose and instead of trying to save her own life she cooks...then she runs away from someone that hasn't tried to hurt her...this story is so motherfucking stupid

and its through not threw...and its SILENCE not fucking science...dumbass
jk chapter 2 . 2/18
your spelling is pretty horrible. Stomach not stomic, pool...blood pools not pulls! barely not bearly...jesus what are you 10...cant use your words?
twimima7 chapter 23 . 7/31/2015
Glad they both realize how much they are alike in many ways. Hope they can survive whats ahead of them together. Thanks for the update and your writing.
twimima7 chapter 19 . 7/31/2015
Finally the truth is out and what a story she told. Hope they believe her and help her.
twimima7 chapter 18 . 7/31/2015
Yes! Good chapter. Thank you.
twimima7 chapter 17 . 7/30/2015
Edward needs to know what's happening in his home and Bella needs to come clean before she is brutally beaten again. Where's Aro hiding and who let Eric in?
wimima7 chapter 16 . 7/30/2015
How do they find her and got in the house that supposedly had the best security?
twimima7 chapter 15 . 7/30/2015
Edward and Bella are made for each other. Love how she likes to get on his nerves. Was she really a stripper?
twimima7 chapter 12 . 7/30/2015
Sad chapter of Bella's life. She really needs help. Yeah and no Emmett , he was only good for clean up.
twimima7 chapter 11 . 7/30/2015
Who's after her and why? Sleeping Emmett and Alice?
twimima7 chapter 10 . 7/30/2015
I half expected it would be Edward, but Emmett is the man! I'm glad Alice is okay and I like the way your story is written. Thank you.
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