|Reviews for Petals in the Wind|
| Cenwyn chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
This is great and very ejoyable! I was laughing and sighing at the same of what first time lovers have to endure. Brilliant!
| mille libri chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
It's so nice to read a realistic sex scene for once, where everything doesn't go just right! Not that the perfect ones are a bad thing, either, but it is a refreshing change to see what might REALLY have happened in that tent with two inexperienced people. Nicely done!
| mutive chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
OMG, this is awesome! Why have I not read this? This is the best Alistair sex ever!
| writewithcourage chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
this is quite good.
| Bert8813 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
i like how you did a lemon that neither wardens arn't well versed in sex that they are virgins
| Kimbo chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Thank you for writing virgin/virgin sex the way it's supposed to be. Too many virginal templar sex gods around these parts.
| polytene chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
There should be more awkward virgin sex, and I like the mix of awkward and sweet and trying again until they get there. Lovely :)
| Traxits chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Wow, Tas. This is great. You have totally have "awkward virgin sex" down pat. Maybe you should write some more? .~
| Sierra-de-Lafayette chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Great job. It wasn't too cheesy and very realistic.
| Midnight Strike chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
*snorts* You almost made me kill myself coughing.
I am...finished. hehe. I love Elishka's realization "That's it?"
| Shineera chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Oh how I love smut :D but this is the good kind... the giggly kind XD you managed to get the right ammounts of just about everything into that story and still keep the characters (yes, I'll have my Warden with a pinch of sass please) true to themselves. Now... write some more :D
| Alairas chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Loved it! Though I think maybe Alistair could add a verse to that SNL song Jizz In My Pants :)
| noneko chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I laughed, I cried from laughing, I laughed some more.
| Phoenike chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
You totally got me at "I kind of finished" :-D Thanks for the giggles, I needed that.
| NoviceFanFic chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Hahahah - yes the first time. True to form, great writing. 3 3