Reviews for check mate
Sapphire1719 chapter 14 . 5/12/2012
OMG IS THIS OVER THIS PULLED AT MY HEARTSTRINGS DAIR ANGST AHHH AND SHE LOVED YOU - S! OMG AFTER 5X22 I CANNOT DEAL THIS WAS SO AMAZING AND HEARTBREAKING BUT I'm HOPEFUL ITS NOT OVER CAUSE YOU WOULDN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. YOU NEED TO MAKE DAN AND BLAIR HAPPY PLEASE ILL GIVE YOU COOKIES. PERFECT STORY! YOU'RE SO TALENTED GOSH
slowpokesheep chapter 14 . 3/14/2012
Wow! Amazing story! I cannot express with words how much I adore this story. It may be out of character for the TV show but I couldn't care less. I love it. I hope you will come back and put a finishing cap on it someday because it just is too good.

I feel terrible for Blair. Serena and Chuck deserve nothing but each other and the misery that should accompany their relationship.

Dan is not an innocent bystander in this but I do believe his intentions are not as dark as Serena's or Chuck's.

I feel worse for Naomi. She didn't deserve any of this. I don't know her but it would be devastating for your husband to just up and leave you without telling you hardly anything.

Anyway, sorry for the long rambling whatever this is but I had to just express how much I enjoyed this story.
jalna chapter 14 . 8/29/2011
good i hope your continue. they are not a lot of faniction about chuck and serena but i always think they were perfect for each other. they were wild to wild for society ypper east side but fit in this society when they want. they were both scandalous, passionate, charming everyone, letting broken heart behind them without knowing. he has a scaring beauty, too handsome fo the good of woman, but he was also ver clever, he was the child of a man who made by himself his fortune, a selfmade man. so he was not like the other upper east side children who all comes from old money, he was gifted witha mind for buisness, he can be cruel , cold and heartless, rough, tough when it need and upsetly charming when it serve his interest. at the age where other teenager live on daddy's money, he ran his first million, he live a life than most adult don't even have, the woman, the drugs (but always wuth control, no one can take advantage of a bass). he do buisness but chuck' style, he continue to have his fun. he didn't have the warm of parent like serena. and like her and with more sucess, he didn't care about what people want for him, he do what he want, be what he want without a care. he is mysterious, dark and poisonous, like a pradator beautiful but dangerous. he know how to be cold, focused it's the best way to make on's man fortune. but he need someone who understand him and like him for what he is don't try to change him and give him the family he always miss and lack. serena is like him in so many ways, she is beautiful, more an enchantress a godess than a human woman, she can charm anyone and even her ex were never imunate about her even if they love another personn. she is very clever more than people give her credits because of her look but she is too wild, she is not the wisest personn, she is too complicated for most of men, they didn't understand ten percent of what she is. she has a good heart, she speak her mind most of the time, she is natural but she can be also the perfect socialite who can find her way out of complicated situation. she can be cold, after all she was the queen without trying in her teenager year where blair had to fight for it, it comes to her naturaly. she want a man who love her for what he is, who learn she do what she want don't let people have a say in what she is. so i hope you will make them finish together with children to ciment them and make them together to face the wordl ( a new scandal for gossip girl. and as for dan he was never good enough to her , he want blair in your story but she will be tired of him before he see it, she is a pure product of upper east side and after chuck, past the new she will be bored with a men like him. continue it's good
LouLouBear1213 chapter 14 . 2/15/2011
I just finished reading and wow Serena and Chuck are horrible people. They deserve each other. Poor Blair, I want to say poor Dan but I don't think that's the case. Anyway I love this story and can't wait for the next update!
A True Dreamer chapter 14 . 2/2/2011
... Even if she doesn't reject him... There is still the messy business of why he first came back into her life...

it's so funny that now... All this time later it's blair who everyone loves, and serena who is insecure...
A True Dreamer chapter 10 . 2/2/2011
gah... I don't know what I want to happen any more...
A True Dreamer chapter 9 . 2/2/2011
oh snaps...
A True Dreamer chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
I hope her decides to tell her and then say he's leaving without accepting serena's money and blair helps him anyway
A True Dreamer chapter 4 . 2/2/2011
i'm glad there was more to why blair and her stopped being friends. I knew there had to be.

I wish she'd had a third option too...
A True Dreamer chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
no guest room? Really? Lol

but wow... This is all going to blow up in his face... I know it...
A True Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
wow...

I don't much like serena from the show but I don't hope she never turns out this bad.

of course that's what I love about your serena lol that she's openly evil and damaged.

can't wait to read more. I kind of hope his wife is cheating on him so he can fall for blair and be with her in the end.
ReNut chapter 14 . 1/26/2011
You're a great writer, probably one the best in FF. Please continue soon!
D chapter 14 . 1/24/2011
i cannot believe my luck.. i may get the conclusion to my favorite dan and blair fic! :D

hope you show the fallout between chuck and blair :D!

love this chapter!
chantel.de chapter 14 . 1/23/2011
i am so happy u updated this story (plz update again as soon as possible!) I've missed it a lot and i thought u were never going to continue it (although i dont blame you gossip girl has lacked good inspiration for a while) I look forward to your next update.
slimkay chapter 14 . 1/23/2011
It's been a while, but man, was it worth the wait.

Amazing chapter. Needy Serena was so well done. The "You're not wrong for me. I am just not right for you" was perfect and really summarizes how I feel about their relationship (in the canon).

I guess I don't mind waiting if all chapters are that good!

Welcome back!
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