|Reviews for Wreckage|
| Dragonjek chapter 16 . 11/9/2015
You are so wonderful.
Please come back.
I love this story.
A complete wreck-but they're managing to pull themselves out of it better than they ever did in canon.
Which actually puts me horrifically on-edge, considering what NGE does when you start feeling hope...
| NarwhalWarlord chapter 18 . 4/19/2015
Pity this is dead.
I've got to say that Wreckage has become my downright favourite Eva fix. The characters are well realized, the plotting is fantastic and well-paced, and overall the execution is flawless. All in all, this is both a great tribute to the original show and an excellent standalone work.
| ezmegaz chapter 18 . 7/31/2014
I'm disappointed... that I haven't seen this fic before. The characters are believable and the plot is interesting (I wonder what Gendou and Yui are planning and why they left Shinji). I wish you'll continue the story sometimes.
| Yoholic chapter 18 . 7/30/2014
WOW. Please update soon.
| yclui chapter 18 . 11/3/2013
This is amazing.
An astoundingly well written twist on the Evangelion universe, this is probably one of the best character driven stories i have read in a good while. The people in the story are very well imagined, and acts utterly in character given the context of the story. Seeing the growth and trials of the people around NERV has never been so enjoyable.
I am not too sure what is happening beyond chapter 18, but i really, really hope there is more of it out there. Cannot wait to read more of this.
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/11/2013
My word, this is good stuff. Really interesting scenario, and I've been loving the character interactions. I think it's neat how you've (I'm guessing) tweaked the consequences of the contact experiment to be simultaneously less severe in some ways and more damaging in others... it seems like rather than taking the test pilot's soul it extracts their capacity for maternal love, or maybe just love in general.
From a certain perspective, Kyoko's madness is even more terrifying than it was in canon... because rather than her delusions hurting Asuka as unintended (or unknown?) collateral damage, she's slowly and systematically destroying her without seeming to recognize or care about it.
I've seen Yui portrayed as a ruthless manipulator a few times, but I think this is the first fic where I've seen her written as just as cold, calculating, and unsympathetic as Gendo - if not more. It's kind of jarring, and you use it to good effect.
Despite my misgivings and some initial discomfort (due to my attachment to Asuka), I've been enjoying the development of Shinji and Hikari's relationship. It's warm and sweet and you've done a good job keeping it believable. It's seriously really cute watching him slowly let himself open up to her, and her to him. And Rei as curious observer is hilarious.
Asuka and Shinji's relationship is also really well done. I nearly always prefer them as a pairing (and there's a part of me that still has hope of that here... though I feel bad because I really like your Hikari); but sometimes it's even more satisfying just to see them become friends. Whether you stick with the currently indicated pairing(s?) or not, I'm looking forward to seeing their friendship grow. I know it won't be a smooth ride, but then where would the drama be? (Though I did enjoy "Blessing," even if it was indulgently fluffy.)
Speaking of people your Shinji opens up to, I really like your Ritsuko. She so often gets the short end of the stick (which does make a lot of sense in close-to-canon stories), so it's nice to see her getting to be a good guy. I was literally cheering during the Unit 02 testing sequence. Also, her internal conflict with her mother (I assume regarding motherhood, among other things) is really fascinating to me. She's just in general a really compelling character. Well done.
This is running long, so I'll leave you with the following: I think your characterizations, concept, and execution are top notch, and I very much hope that you will come back and finish this story some day. If that's not in the cards, I wish you all the best in whatever pursuits you choose (or have chosen for you) instead.
Thanks for writing!
| Gemini011 chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Getting flashbacks to Nobody Dies here...
| Gemini011 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
I am so intrigued right now. And I have the most terrible feeling that I'll be left hanging when I get to the end of the published chapters, but I'm still going to read this.
Blast this addiction to interesting Eva fanfiction.
| Akatsuki001 chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
It is different and when you are talking about an eva's fanfic that is very good. People keep writing the same episode again and again. I have been memorizing every line _
| Wzd JA chapter 18 . 6/15/2013
Very good story. I hope you decide to continue it.
| dsty292 chapter 18 . 2/6/2013
I've been looking for something like this! Set in the Evangelion world but doesn't keep using the same exact tropes over and over and over.
And, it's actively updating apparently!
Thank you for this!
| z-vo chapter 18 . 8/16/2012
Just found this story. Really enjoying your twists on cannon so far! Looking forward to seeing 'who' is inside each EVA. Really enjoying your writing of Shinji, Hikari and Asuka. Great work.
| Luakey chapter 18 . 6/25/2012
This has been a brilliant read and I hope to see a continuation soon. Your inclusion of an entirely new plot element, the Russians, really gives this story a different flavor than other alternate universe fics. It adds a whole new level of suspense that I think is refreshing. Great job!
| kazikamikaze24 chapter 18 . 6/5/2012
You are amazing! I love every single chapter, and every difference within this is magnificent. I truly, TRULY can not wait for the next chapter, no, to follow this story until the very end. Until next time!
| Jozern chapter 15 . 5/15/2012
A good story, enjoying the small changes and looking forward for explenations (like why Yui is alive) but I think Zeppelin is a complietly failed character. Why? because you are making her a sociopath who can only slap and react violently to people with a doctor tag slapped on. She has NO purpose, NO place in the Ikaris' plans and just feels complietly out of place. Why the fuck do people tolerate her? There is no answer for any of these questions other than your will to make an asshole character for all to hate on.
She should be acting smartly, and doing subtle manipulations and not this retarded "I KNOW EVEYTHING WRAAAAHH" shit.
keep up the good work but the zeppelin problems has to be solved. Back to reading _