This was such an achingly beautiful chapter. I am at a loss for words. Could you please visit my brain and describe for me how much I love this story? Because you seem to capture on the page (or screen or whatever) what love feels like. Your descriptions make me want to melt. Seriously, "the white light of the moon crystallized behind his lids." And "Like their identities were composed of the taste of the other's tongue, the friction of the skin of the other's lips against theirs, the pressure of the other's body giving theirs purpose and shape."

gwa. Screw modesty. You deserve ten times more readers than you already have.

Please update! that was amazing and adorable and stressful and i desperately need more.

:D Great chapter. I can't wait for more.

:O

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I'll totally bake you cookies!

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cliche running away from kiss scene. bo! Boo the running away part. Bo!

That was... good. No really. Really good.

I'm glad at least Draco has comes to terms with himself.

Yeeah!

Now that is exactly what the first kiss between Harry and Draco should be like!

Messy, angry, complex, fighting. Ah, the great stuff in life.

Tee hee.

hee hee hee hee hee hee

*giggles and smiles*

Bloody 1:30 in the morning and I started laughing hysterically until a neighbor opened their window and yelled at me.

Great scene :)

I laughed, I smiled, and I read. Every word.

Congratulations. I usually find myself skipping over long paragraphs without dialogue, but there's just the right amount of thought and speech balanced.

WOW. You have captured the tension and conflict perfectly, beautifully, in this chapter. WOW. :) Very sexy, and very well written! :)

"The name slipped off his tongue and dissolved into the dark between them, clinging to and weighing down every particle of air so that it pulled the space between them taut."

This line was beautifully written. I read it over and over because I liked it so very much. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Beautiful, just beautiful. I'm in awe of your writing and this amazing story and the intensity of this chapter and I'm so very glad that it's "fixed" (even if there's more trouble to come). Whatever Harry thinks, he is very brave, and I'm very glad he is :) Now Draco just has to forget all about that potion and all the troubles that go with it...sigh... As always, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Ok i love you for fixing it but i have one itty bitty little niggle draco said "Now is all I can promise" that sounds to me as if he still thinks he's no good for harry, might try to run again and since it's not from draco's point of view then we dont know. but otherwise amazing chapter !

Very nice chapter.

I liked the way Draco surrendered to Harry. That was perfect.

Can't wait for next chapter !