Reviews for Two Sides of the Same Coin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oops. I meant harry/malfoy |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the parallels you've drawn between Rj and harry/potter |
![]() ![]() ![]() this scene made me so sad because I know so many people who have done something similar lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this prologue. it really sets the tone of hurt and anger for Draco's interactions with Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far I really like your story. The plot is perfect, things don’t develop too quickly, and it’s exceptionally written (which is fairly rare for a fan fiction) are you thinking about becoming a published author? I really think you could do it. However, i do have a point of criticism amidst the praise, and it’s about the dialogue. There isn’t really anything wrong with it per say, but for being between two teenagers, it’s way too formal. Teenagers don’t talk like that. Honestly, I don’t think adults do either. Don’t get me wrong, I still like reading it, but it does make it seem a bit... off. But all in all I love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FRICK that was so good So so so good What a perfect ending I’m floating |
![]() ![]() This was very enjoyable, I give it a ten out out of ten, this is mainly due to the fact that in some alternate universe this could be plausible other than others I’ve read, I also want to commend the author at their good writing skills, great job pal ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story was okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a continuity error in chapter 12 "from thine lips". in chapter one you stateand then the shocking rumors surrounding his parent's sudden and mysterious death" regarding Draco and refer to him as "the Malfoy orphan", but in chapter 12 you write "he did know that Malfoy's parents were conspicuously absent from his life now, and Harry didnt know why". Really enjoying this story otherwise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha Draco |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Draco, you have no idea what you're doing to Harry when you do things like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven’t smiled this much in ages I enjoyed this so much. Felt like the truest representation of the characters I’ve seen in a while and when canon fails you Turn to the fans |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this fic. The characters’ personalities are realistic and the ending is so amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so amazing I tried to scroll more at the end of the epilogue to see if maybe I could somehow conjure more of this brilliant fanfic |
![]() ![]() Oh this was way too short how could you do this to me? |