Reviews for New Love
Wendy Waddles chapter 8 . 6/19/2010
Such a cute story between Sev and your OC, Rose! Awww... he proposed! Just an observation but you may want to use some symbols or a line to denote POV changes in the chapters. Keep up the good work. :)
EmeraldIsleEyes79 chapter 8 . 6/19/2010
What a sweet story! I just read through it and was very delighted by it. It does get a bit confusing at first when you switch between his and her point of view in the story - maybe you could use a page break line to signal the change for your readers? And putting little extra comments in parenthesis in a sentence is somewhat distracting when they would all work well as part of the story itself and not like an afterthought. I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story! Thanks for sharing. :)
SandNinja101 chapter 7 . 3/25/2010
Yay! Finally, the relationship has begun!
SandNinja101 chapter 6 . 2/22/2010
Aww man! So close!
SandNinja101 chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
Keep the updates comin! _
SandNinja101 chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
I'm JUST NOW getting caught up on my Harry Potter stuff.
SandNinja101 chapter 4 . 2/5/2010
I love Snape. _
Type-R chapter 4 . 2/5/2010
Awesome Chapter

Please update soon!
RecordxPlayer chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
It's a good beginning...can't wait to see how it progresses. Happy Writings :)
AmayaKiyoshiRose chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
Hi, just wanted to say I love your story and I can't wait for your next chapter. _
gothicflower chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
Nice story, but I have the feeling everything is moving too quickly though it is only my opinion. Sev's mother being muggle born was confusing as she comes from pure-blood family.
Talim chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
I love your story ;)
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