Reviews for Beside You in Time
Holli-chan chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This. Made. Me. Cry.

However I enjoyed it very much :D great job.
Florence Pinky-Poo chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Woah. I feel really calm right now, and I'm not sure if that's the reaction that would be expected.

That was...that was really quite nice. Brilliant.
anonymousXandrogynous chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
meh, i liked it, a lot actually. though it is indeed depressing i liked how abstract it was, it all just seemed to fit right and i loved it. you're such an awesome writer~

MARVELCOMICS chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
And this is why I hate Takada. I was cheering Matt on the whole time. She deserved everything she got.
ChocoAndCigs chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This is just... breathtaking.

I love the italic words in between the papagraphs, explaining Matt's "thoughts"?

They're so beautiful. Like lyrics. Poetry.

When Matt lays down beside Mello and explains on how it SHOULD feel. God,a part of me breaks.

I can feel the emotion.

Poor Matt convinces himself that he'll be able to see Mello's breathing and- I'm going to summerize the whole story because I just love it so much. xD

Every aspect of it just blows me away.

Kudos to you; keep writing!

I'd love to see more of this heartbreaking writing.

And hey! Humor would be good too. ;)
AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I really really liked this story! I love your writing style. I don't know exactly how to describe it, but it was really great :) Very sad :(
xElementFivex chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Oh my god, I'm dying a little inside now.

And by a little... I mean a whole lot.

That was just so beautiful. And sad. And just...ugh...jealousy radiates from me at your writing right now.