Reviews for Sonic Switch 2: The Golem Wars
HawkRider chapter 10 . 11/12/2012
Ah. So Dash is going to be Sonic and Amy's child... That was a nice little addition. I also REALLY want to know whether Knuckles was telling the truth about him and Silver...

Sorry. This was a great story! I really enjoyed reading it. I kinda wish there was more, but then it may end up being spoiled...

Anyway, great work! Keep it up!
HawkRider chapter 9 . 11/12/2012
Uh oh... It may be a good idea for them all to move away from the mountain for the moment. It may just save them...

Anyway, nice chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen in the last one...
HawkRider chapter 8 . 11/12/2012
Well, I guess the fake Tails and Shadow don't get on nearly as well as their counterparts. Well, it's good to see that only two of them are left, for now.

Anyway, I hope Tails manages to escape that fate.. And I have a feeling that it has something to do with the disintergrater...
HawkRider chapter 7 . 11/12/2012
Oh, great. Well, at least the fake Sonic is out of it...

Man, I wonder what fake Shadow did to the Chaos Emeralds. And that Shadow, is why you don't hide several Chaos Emeralds together when you have an evil voice in you head. Seriously. It never comes to any good...
HawkRider chapter 6 . 11/11/2012
Ah, everyone is back to normal. And there are hints that there may be Knuckles/Silver later...

Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. It's great to see the Chao Garden again. I love that place.

So, I'll finish this story off tomorrow. Sorry, but it is late here and I have school. You'll get my opinion on this afterwards.
HawkRider chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Oh, great. Sonic and Tails have switched personalities and, it seems, memories... Joy...

Still, they're everywhere. I really hope they'll all find each other again soon.

I also hope that Shadow will not listen to that voice...
HawkRider chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
Well, I wish them all luck in taking on the Golems. And why is the commander always so much bigger? I mean no offence, I just perpetually look for a commander of a magical army who is short...

Anyway, I really like this chapter. Sonic really is acting oddly here...
HawkRider chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Well, this should get interested. I really cannot wait to find out how they'll all get rid of Nova.

And I also have to comment on how well Shadow and Liam are getting on. They're great!
HawkRider chapter 2 . 11/11/2012
Ah, Chao. I love them. Hmm... A Chao that looks like Tails. That reminds me of one of the older games...

Anyway, I really liked this chapter. You did a great job with it! Seriously! Well done!
HawkRider chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Oh, Tails. Don't tell Eggman where you put the disintergrater.

Hmm... I wonder how Eggman managed to get back into his body. I did love that, but still...
Yamiii chapter 10 . 1/25/2010
Yay! Yeah! Good story! Good story! I'm sad to see it end... I KNEW there was a reason Sonic's my favorite character! Great job with this! I absolutely love it! I hope you write more again soon! I love your stuff. :)
Lord Kelvin chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
This is a half-empty screen.

Bad. When you write a story for a K audience, you have to accommodate younger readers with short attention spans. Honestly, I am very bothered to scroll all the way down. It would be a much better idea to condense your thoughts and reduce the length, so it would correspond to the public's expectations.

The fact you need so many separators also tells me the chapter should be broken. Concentrate on one event. If you span over several spaces, people become confused because you don't give them enough time to digest the info. Confusion loses you readership.

You have very absurd pieces of dialogue-only and description-only. Tie them up together. It's boring to read characters talking in thin air and then reading about air without any characters in it. Metaphor. Combine them for better results. It will save you scrolling space on the way down.

Daft OCs are not welcome in chapter one. If you put an OC there, readers understand you are not a fan, you are unable to dedicate your fiction to the canon stars we all love, and basically you don't write for us fans, but for yourself. In that case, it's very odd that you decide to post on a fan fiction website. Original fiction is that way. Once more, that's the impression an OC in chapter one always brings. Loses readers.

Finally, your summary is scary. It's supposed to be about this story, and all you do is chatter about the prequel. Boring, not to the point, and readers are bound to be frightened thinking: "gosh, I won't understand a thing in that story. I'm supposed to read the prequel." Prevent such attitudes and speak about sequelness and your love for your own writing in later chapters. Every work is supposed to be wholesome and work as an independent entity. If this story does not make sense without THAT story, your writing comes to waste.

Think about these points and assure readers feel welcome, respected and wanted in your abode. They will thank you. Myself, too.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.
Yamiii chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
Nice twist. When I read this chapter, I thought to muself, "This story's just half over!" I hope you keep it going for a while. I love it.
Yamiii chapter 6 . 1/23/2010
Awesomeness! I really love this story! Sonic and Tails... Poor guys. They'll be fine, though. *hugs them both* Truly great story. You deseres more reviews and from other people. :) Keep writing! I love your stories!
Yamiii chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
LOVE IT! Sonic thinks he's Tails, huh? GENIUS! NEVER saw it coming! XD Great chapter! Keep it up!
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