Reviews for I Love College
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1
ROY LAVALIERING RIZA MADE ME SQUEAL LIKE A PIG! MY PRECIOUS OTP! PLS KEEP THIS GOING
Pouda-P chapter 27 . 2/12
AHHH this fic is beautiful
Hope you would continue this
Even if not...I enjoyed
Guest chapter 27 . 1/13
Please update this! This story is a masterpiece!
Yla chapter 27 . 1/13
This was one of the best reading experiences I've ever had.

First off, you are good in terms of writing technicalities (proper grammar, spelling, punctuation). Sure, there have been minor errors (like some misspelled or different words, forgotten punctuations, etc) but they weren't off putting enough to stop me from reading.

Secondly, I want to commend how you make the plot flow. For a fic with 200k words, I never found this boring. The way you describe the setting, the people, the situation, and the story as a whole is so vivid and colorful. This story has a life if its own, and I think you executed the plot very well. Your world-building was so intense I felt like I was one with the students of Centrak University as well as the Greek world. You immersed us readers in the world your characters were living in.

And lastly, I liked your characterization. Most of them retained their characterization in canon, but I also liked the modifications you did to them. The characters weren't perfect but at the same time, they aren't disagreeable. Your characters aren't 2-dimesional. You humanized each character. They weren't just plot devices; you gave them their own stories and that's what I really liked about this fic. Oh, and let's not forget how well you forged their relationships. I really liked that this fic did not only focus on romance, but also of family and friendship. And the romance was very well-developed and not instant. Even the characters I do not care that much about really grew on me. Each relationship was unique, and this made all of them interesting. Miles and Olivier's was different with that of Maes and Gracia's, and I love both just the same. I also always looked forward to Ed and Winry's, as well as Roy and Riza's relationship. I can also see the potential in Jean and Becca, Denny and Maria. Breda's character is really likeable, and Armstrong's discovery of who he really is was written very well. Rose's thoughts were also very realistic.

With this, I am very excited with what will happen next. Why did Garfiel break up with Armstrong? Who the hell was threatening Winry? What is the significance of Scar's appearance? Will we see more of Al? Are we gonna see more of the Xingese gang (Ling, Lan Fan, or even Mei)? What will happen to Roy and Riza? Will Riza end up liking this Patrick guy? Will Ed and Winry grow apart? Will Jean and Becca finally get together?

Thanks so much for this masterpiece! I hope you continue writing. You are very excellent at this. I can really see that you are putting so much effort for every chapter. I sincerely hope that you could continue this wonderful story. I will wait for updates, no matter how long it may take.

Anyways, I just want you to know that I have read a lot of FMA fics, and this is one of the best out there. I'm actually shocked that I only found this now. Hahaha. Anyway, I hope you are doing well!

-Yla
Guest chapter 27 . 1/13
jfc roy mustang! what the hell ya doin?

anyway, this one's a good chap! nice job!
Yla chapter 6 . 1/11
This fic is gold. It's sad that I only got to read this now! Anyway, this is one of the fics that made me squeal madly and I feel like melting because of the fluff. Nice job!
Dragodden chapter 2 . 9/19/2015
I usually avoid school fics, but I have to say, I'm very much enjoying your writing and story! It's nice to get even one more great quality Edwin story on this site!
KorraPanera chapter 27 . 9/4/2015
I absolutely love this. Is this how soriety is like in real life? The writing is fantasfic and the storyline brilliant. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
Suzume Suzuki chapter 27 . 8/9/2015
Yeah, an update at last! I'm a little worried about Winry but I can't wait to see Roy and Riza patch things up. I really like those two together.
TheRealFiction981015 chapter 27 . 8/8/2015
Love this story, it's a very good take on the lore, with a bit more of a grounded feel. Please, continue as long as you feel you can.
minatoHaiiiiii chapter 27 . 8/6/2015
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i fkn love this fic it will never get old
Hailey chapter 26 . 8/3/2015
I love this story so much. Defiently one of my favorites. I was wondering if you were ever going to finish it?
sillybunny chapter 27 . 8/4/2015
OMG! ahh I can't wait to know what happens next! update soon on please!
Honorsong chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Please please please add the next few chapters! I'm so obsessed with this story! I've literally been watching for over a year waiting for you to update. It's so rare when someone actual manages to capture the characters like this. Usually people mess up there personalities but you are a great author.
BuggyNess chapter 3 . 8/3/2015
Just finding this AU fic and I'm honestly depressed because I have to find time to finish/catch up because so far, it's so good!
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