Reviews for The Cherished One
Dizzygrl28 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Wow! What a way to intro a story. The posting of this is sorta ironic; I've had an inkling to explore the very darkest side of the charcters lately and this story looks perfect for me.

I like how you seem to be portraying Edward as the stalker, which is so fitting since, let's face it, that's what he was in the books, albeit an innocent stalker. It appears he is blurring fantasy with reality and I'm curious to see how he crosses those boundries in the future chaps.

Looking forward to more.
n0 l0nger in use chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
She gets away from one sicko and ends up being saved by another.
Los Grotos chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Kind of creepy, but whom am I to judge?
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Something is wrong in this picture.

Does Bella know that Edward is stalking her?
n0 l0nger in use chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Is he watching her through a hidden camera?
ringoffire73 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS!

LOVE IT SO FAR!
polemic chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
I love how dark this story is turning out. The way you've romanticized his actions is strangely alluring. Can't wait for more.
tracieo chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
still here - intrigued -
lostsince011711 chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Bad Edward YUMMY! Can't wait for more...
edmom chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
o i am so intriged more please and thank you
SydneyAlice chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
I always love your ideas. Can't wait to see where you take this.
deletedtrash chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
I really like this story and can't wait for more.
jimemon chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
I really like these kind of stories, the ones where we are not gonna end up rooting for Edward so I am really excited about this. Great chapter!
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