Reviews for City of Clary
peachpenguin chapter 7 . 1/17
good story, but it's really very offensive to say that Alec would be attractive if only he wasn't gay
Guest chapter 9 . 1/11
Its awesome so far please make her get pregnant please so that way its more interesting
Guest chapter 9 . 12/21/2015
Guest chapter 9 . 12/20/2015
Im waiting for an updateeee...
Secrativetales chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
I know this is an old post but I would try expanding your vocab. Peheps(this is from a writer's perspective not a prudes perspective) you might curse less. Use it at more opportune moments in order to intensify the scene. Also especially when doing this I would do my best to stray slightly from your own writing style and try to focus on mirroring the author of the original story to amplify the emotional efect- if people are reading this, it is likely because they like the series, so making it seem a bit more like said book will increase their interest and ability to relate it with the book. Oh, and um, typos. Grammar, punctuation, capitalization but most of all spelling. I saw the word wonton appearquite simultaniously. I had to assume that you meant wanting because that is the only reasonable explanation I could come up with.
Audrey Girl chapter 7 . 12/6/2015
Don't be sorry, this is really good!
Audrey Girl chapter 2 . 12/6/2015
It's incredible!
Reader chapter 9 . 12/5/2015
No more chapters :... (
Nissa chapter 9 . 11/26/2015
Hey I think it's awesome but I would seriously love it if u added onto this more thanks :)
Love chapter 7 . 11/1/2015
Omg that was fab
Guest chapter 9 . 10/28/2015
Please I need an update!
Your writing is soo good!
I need more clace in my life and until shadowhunters premieres amazing fanfic is the only thing that helps me quench my thirst for everything clace!
Guest chapter 9 . 10/18/2015
Youre a Fantastic writer! Keep going please I need more! Also im dying to know if you're goin to make clary pregnant any time soon. So please do what you do best and write! \._./
TMI chapter 7 . 10/5/2015
If Sebastian and Jace were still bonded (Jace can feel whatever Sebastian feels and Sebastian can feel whatever Jace feels!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/13/2015
Hellooo? Whered you go?
Please come back to thi even tho itll be like two years later
graciepop chapter 9 . 9/7/2015
This is really good. For future you could add more romantic stuff for jace and clary but i loved the bit in pandamonium. It was really well written! Good job!
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