Reviews for Carlisle's story of the pregnancy
the captains wife chapter 17 . 4/25/2010
WOW! Great chapter!

I always wondered what Carlisle was thinking during this time.

You did a wonderful job on this chapter!
twifantasyfan chapter 17 . 4/25/2010
Wow. Great chapter.
JuleWhatev chapter 17 . 4/25/2010
WOW... really thrilling and I liked this new side of Esme, that she is ready to do almost everything for her family, also stealing... it was really amazing... I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sand n' Sable chapter 17 . 4/25/2010
Oh, please! Hurry and get to the next chapter! I love it!
Justchillingandliving chapter 7 . 4/21/2010
i love the story's awesome
JuleWhatev chapter 16 . 4/19/2010
Very interesting and very good... I like it a lot! And I can't wait for the next chapters... it's slowly coming closer to the real thrill, so I'm excited... update soon!
Kimberly S chapter 16 . 4/19/2010
Once again u did an excellent job, thank u
the captains wife chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
I love this chapter!

I thought you did a wonderful job with the conversation between Rose and Carlisle.

I can't wait to read more!

Update soon :)
twifantasyfan chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
Very nice chapter. Did notice a couple typos, but very minor.
RafaelaAngelusLapsus chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
it gets closer to the end...can't wait for the next one :)
QueenReginaSwan chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
more please soon
Sand n' Sable chapter 16 . 4/18/2010
I think...I loved it! It was SO refreshing to see that side of Rose. Please, keep going! I feel it won't be long until the baby is born!
CooLibrarian chapter 15 . 4/4/2010
I love Seth's carefree attudie, of course he would have no problem with Esme taking care of him...it's food no matter who makes it. Good job at charcterzaion
QueenReginaSwan chapter 15 . 3/31/2010
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Mahlisya chapter 15 . 3/31/2010
W-A-U-W. This is probably the best story I've read here.

It's like I am reading one of the books, it feels exactly like it, the way it is written. You know how you want to read more, but you hate how you get closer the end, and every time I read the books again, I love them again, I have read this story twice and I feel the same.

I hope you'll update again very soon. :D

'xx
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