Reviews for wires, coming out of your skin
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 3/6
Huh, that's a twist. Great job and great writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
I love the grief Obi-wan's death induces. The image of Anakin bowed over Obi-wan's body and clutching it was so pleasing.
AI chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
Whoa interesting twist!
musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Oh, Palpatine made a DRASTIC mistake there!
powerrangersfangirl22 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
That is a great story!
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Good stuff. Looking for the next one...
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Touching story, although the connection of the title and the actual story still eludes me. (Still a great title anyways).
Dinny93 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
This gave me goosebumps; you're a fantastic writer! Off to read some more now :)


ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Wait...he's running? I don't get it... But I like it :)
pronker chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Bittersweet and this lands you smack dab in the middle of everything, very nice and exciting!
asdfqwert chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
I just realised I've never reviewed this. What can I say? It's amazing. It is truly a wonderful piece of writing. This is definitely going on my favourites. :heart:

Thank you for writing this.
NerdyNel chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I love this - it's like you can *feel* Anakin's pain at this most profound loss and betrayal. (Sorry for how cliche that sounds.:))
WynCatastrophe chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Wow! What a touching look at how things could have played out, if the Republic had ended just a little bit differently. I really love how your paragraph breaks emphasize the fragmentation of Anakin's feelings.

And then he begins to run ... wow.
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
A very well written oneshot. :)
Dark Horse Writer chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Hey great story so far, I hope this isn't a one shot and that it will be a multichapter. Hope to read the next part soon.
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