|Reviews for Wounded Afternoon BOOK II|
| Kenzington chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I cried so hard when I read this.
| Kenzington chapter 2 . 10/31/2010
"SHE'S NOT A VIRGIN BRIDE!" Hahahahahahahahahahah! I almost peed when I read this.
| Danielle Kaplinger chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
very nice plot i love what you did with switching back in forth with POV's. you did a very nice job with the intimate scenes
sinc big enough Twilght Fan to write a Fanfiction for it I want to share with you a ver awesome Twilight Fan Site...
.com ... here there are a bunch of Twifans just like you there is a public chat room blogs photos and all the updates about the movies and cast you love most...
So I hope to talk to you there TTYL
Danielle Kaplinger AKA Macky
| githarington chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
! everything was going so well im in tears specially since im team edward
| EsmeraldasDreams chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
it's so cute love it x3
| Lostliveson4eva chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
aww great story (:
| SailorSoul chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
I luv this story! Yay Edward survived! Woo! Plz write again soon :D
| lauren0126 chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
]oh my god this is sooo sad. you started it soo well and it looked like things were going to be happy with a baby, and then BOOM you throw in that Edward's dying. i was crying so bad that my mom thought somethin was wrong. i told her that edward was dyin and she was like okay... lol. Even though it was sad it was well written and very good. great job!
| Nessie96 chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
fabulous stroy! definetly "stephenie meyer worthy"
| Property-Of-Negan26 chapter 2 . 6/5/2010
This story is amazing and sad at the same time.I love how well you used your are very creative.
| eeddwwaarrdiloveya chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
This was so amazing its beyond comprehestion(Did I spell correctly)You deserve every single complament you get this was so sad and so hartwarming you should so consider becomeing writer because you are amazing at it and any one who doesn't know that is completely and utterly mentaly retarded
| TintedRoses chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
*gasp* I had predicted that edward was going to die, since you stated that it was not good for team Edward fans, but when I got to the end, my eyes became glossy, and if there had been anymore in this chapter, I probably would have started crying. I'm a team Jacob fan, but I feel so sorry for them all. A friend recommended this to me, and said she had to stop because it was so sad. So, this actually means that it was very well written, and I hope you continue, so the real waterworks will come. ;) ~BookJunkiez
| tazzz D chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
amazing. good luck publishing it when you're older. :D
| alcoholic-polar-bear-pillow chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
If I had to say how I felt about this story in one word it would be-wow. Thias was amazing and I absolutely loved it. Please write more!