|Reviews for More to the Story Itself|
| Kuyuchii chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
truly brilliantly written, my hat goes off to you, sir! (or madam::s) I suggest something on the Doctor feels when Sarah gets poisoned by the Cybermat, when she is experimented upon by the Sontaran or when she is captured by Chase! this sounds really morbid, I guess, but I mean well! _ hope this helps somehow (but I'm not all too sure how it could)! keep up the good work!
| AssortedScribbler chapter 13 . 9/5/2010
I may have said this before, apologies if I have, but reading this fic is like wrapping yourself up in a favourite, comfy blanket and settling down in an armchair with a mug of hot tea. It's comforting, beautiful, subtle and calming. I could read it forever. Your grasp of the characters is perfect, bar nothing, I always agree with you on your analysis and addition to the episodes, which is incredibly rare. I forget which chapter it is, but when Sarah's head been injured, the Doctor has that gash on the side of his face, I can see the entire following scene playing out in front of my eyes and found it unbelievably touching that he mentally stopped her from feeling the pain he didn't manage to shield her from. I really hope you keep finding odd tidbits to add here, I'll never get tired of reading them. Happy typing! x
| timano chapter 13 . 8/8/2010
An excellent story. I've always felt Sarah to be the best companion of them all-despite what the "New Who" fans might believe. (I mean, Rose and Amy and the rest of them are great, but nothing like SJS!) 10 out of 10 stars.
| MyMadness chapter 10 . 8/1/2010
Sigh. All of this is such sweet stuff. Really enjoying it.
| Wings the Destroyer chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
I absolutely love these! Four/Sarah Jane is my favorite pairing. :) You do such a great job of writing them together.
| Garden Gnomie chapter 13 . 6/15/2010
with warch doctor things change
but for some reson the doctor still thinks nothings difrant for his compainions.
| TheDoctorAndSarah chapter 12 . 5/16/2010
That's so sweet! I liked "'Sarah, would I take you some place I knew was dangerous?' He smiled as he noted her raised eyebrow. 'On purpose, I mean.'" Hehehehe...
| Garden Gnomie chapter 12 . 5/16/2010
this chapter was awesome
Though i was expecting sara to tumble onto the ground when she opens her eyes and saw the doctor when they were in the zero room.
this has been a nice break from Betaing and writing a research essay.
| Weimlady chapter 12 . 5/16/2010
I thought you already did Morbius. Hmm. Will have to re-read. Anyway-loved the zero room scene, and this line:
"Sarah, would I take you some place I knew was dangerous?' He smiled as he noted her raised eyebrow. 'On purpose, I mean.'"
He'd better add that last bit! He does nothing BUT take her places he knows are dangerous!
And of course the cuddle at the end was ace. Always!
| VHunter07 chapter 6 . 4/20/2010
AW! Another lovely moment. :) Poor things, I don't think they'll ever actually GET one of those long holidays. :( Just doesn't happen when your in the TARDIS! haha Very nice.
| VHunter07 chapter 5 . 4/20/2010
Sorry I'm a day late! Yesterday ended up nuts.
I love this chapter! Soo sweet. Just one of those perfect Doctor Sarah Jane moments that you always wish had been in the extras on the dvds or something. :) They're just adorable the both of them. *grin*
And now she's kinda telepathic! I like. :)
| Garden Gnomie chapter 11 . 3/20/2010
| Weimlady chapter 11 . 3/18/2010
WooT! Well, that was worth coming home to! Even if I should have been in bed an hour and a half ago and I know I will regret staying up to read all the new installments from my favorite writers in the morning. What am I saying? It IS morning!
Classic mutual hurt/comfort-not sure I've ever done hurt/comfort. Turn and turn about, yes, but not both hurt at the same time. Interesting! And of course what it leads to-VERY interesting! :) Finally all that sleeping together turned into-sleeping together! "She'd felt the Universe open to her in new ways that she'd never expected..." I just bet she did! Lucky girl!
| TheDoctorAndSarah chapter 11 . 3/18/2010
Oh, Oh, Oh, I so loved this! These two deserve to be together forever. They've gone through so much for so long. No other companion has ever touched the Doctor's hearts the way Sarah does. To quote Princess Bride, :This is true love, you think this happens everyday?" Thanks for a great story Spydurwebb.
| Weimlady chapter 10 . 3/7/2010
"She reached up and put both her hands on the frame, resting her forehead against the doors and closing her eyes. As she concentrated, she knew the Doctor only wanted to be left alone to collect his thoughts."
Aww! They're so bonded, even if they haven't made it formal yet!
"Apparently, life on Earth had the potential to be an adventure as well. "
Nice shout-forward to the SJA.
"The Doctor stood at the console when he felt a sharp ache in his chest."
Yeah, that bond again! :)
Liked them both being horrified at the other almost being caught in the machine. That was a pretty horrific end for a baddie, wasn't it? And they had some close calls!
Also liked the TARDIS being parked in Sarah's flat. They never really addressed its absence or where it was parked in the story, did they? So it might as well be in her flat as not.
Good one! Where are we off to next?