Reviews for The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan |
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baru-chan chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 I'm so happy that you've decided to post a new story! This looks like a promising start. When would Lothiriel realize, I wonder, that Leona is more than a mere courier from Rohan? :D |
cCeret chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 Hi there Lia! I'm glad that you start another story! WOHO! Last year when you finished On the Wings of the Storm, I couldn't congratulate for it, so CONGRATULATIONS! This new story seems very interesting, also this 'courier' *giggle* Can't wait for more! Tere |
LOTRRanger chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 teeheehe I have a feeling that Leona will have a different name the next time Lothíriel sees him. :D This is an awesome beginning! I can't wait to read the rest. ~~Ranger |
kairi-senpai chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 yayayayayaya yay! D love it! i could so totally see them D update soon! lol i liked the whole lion thing D update soon D |
Deandra chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 Oh, yay! It's finally here, and on a gloomy, rainy day. Actually, the power just came back on so I could even discover it, and I read quickly in case it went out again! Since I'd already seen this chapter, it was a slight letdown, but at least with you posting now it means I will see more soon! One thing: It was one of those late, sunny autumn days, - would probably be better as "one of those sunny, late autumn days" (theoretically, written as you did it, 'late', 'sunny' and 'autumn' are all adjectives to 'day' and if you leave out all but 'late' it doesn't make a lot of sense; but if you shift the position then it ties 'late' to 'autumn' and makes more sense. You might even make that connection stronger by hyphenating it as 'late-autumn') - Deandra |
Stardust0808 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 OMG! That was so cute! I completely loved it! Who would've thought Eomer was in to a bit of mischief? :D |
The-Lady-Isis chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 Oh, she's not going to thank him for that, is she? Bad Eomer, bad Eomer! On another note - I'm so happy you're back! Also, if it's not too much trouble, could I run a couple of ideas past you regarding my LOTR fic? If you're too busy don't worry about it. This was a fantastic start, Lia. I look forward to more. |
black4minister chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 hahaha, i think i know where this is going - and i like it. I particularly liked lothy telling him that he also rode well, lol. can't wait to see how this goes on. looking forward to it, blacky |
Nemea chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 I squeed madly when I saw that you'd posted again. I missed your writing and I missed Eomer and Lothiriel. This story already started fantasically. I enjoy the perspective and can't wait to read more! Hope you're well! Liebe Grüße! |
esondie chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 Love it! Of course, I love all your stories! I can't wait to see where this one takes me. |