|Reviews for Lost in Another World|
| jayley chapter 5 . 3/14/2011
enjoyable story, although i think you seem to have forgotten what you'd already included in your story, like sam knowing about the baby thing. she learned that in the chapter before this
| lucyferr chapter 5 . 8/1/2010
Feeling sorry for Sam - she'll be destroyed by this horrific culture. Even a smart hottie like Daniel isn't worth being destroyed like this. I'll give up reading here.
| M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 3 . 7/19/2010
A couple of minor nitpicks...
Star Gate is Stargate, Gao'ouls is Goa'ulds, and while "Sha'uri" is the correct spelling (I could be wrong), that was her unmarried name. As per Abydonian tradition, it was changed to Sha'ri.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 9 . 3/1/2010
| ruth hammond chapter 9 . 1/28/2010
a fun story
I liked the get together at the end
brought it all together
| nexis44 chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
Aw! Gonna miss this. Thanks for sharing
| ruth hammond chapter 8 . 1/27/2010
interesting place to stop, want more soon, please
| nexis44 chapter 8 . 1/26/2010
Cute chapt:-) I woulda reviewed sooner but for some reason I'm not getting my alerts to my inbox:-( but I will review every chance I get
| nexis44 chapter 7 . 1/25/2010
Oh really good chapt:)
| ruth hammond chapter 6 . 1/25/2010
glad to see the update and a good one it was...
waiting for another when it comes...
| nexis44 chapter 6 . 1/23/2010
| ruth hammond chapter 5 . 1/23/2010
ah,just the right place to have a cliffie. looking forward to the next installment.
| nexis44 chapter 5 . 1/22/2010
Nice twist:-) more soon pls
| dreameralways chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
I think that your characterizations are a little bit off, but not so much that it can't be forgiven. Entertaining story. Will there be more?
Also, technical notes:
"only 3 miles," holy crap! Even carrying a small child that far is exhausting let alone a full grown woman.
The idea that they wouldn't find Sam and Daniel for years, even if thoroughly entertaining, is probably not very likely. With good analysts using UAVs, it probably wouldn't be too hard to pick up a trail recently left by a bunch of horses; though, they might have to get it a little at a time and then do more searching in that area. Also, horses are pretty easy to track in areas with high vegetation.
Still, interesting concept and I am enjoying it. I do hope that there will be more.
| nexis44 chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
Score! New chapt:-) really good