|Reviews for Dead End Game|
| Vytina chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I cannot believe I only just found this! I'm ashamed of myself!
This is...perfect is the only way I can describe it, and even then it doesn't seem enough - and I'm not exaggerating. That image of a tiny scrap of paper with nothing but a phone number on it, lying at the bottom of a desk drawer is so powerful. I had no trouble imagining Kaiba reaching down for it, then stopping himself and slamming the drawer shut once again.
The ending lines, "A man whose number he would never call because he did not have a reason to call up a ghost that had almost taken him down to hell. Because he could still take him down there and Seto Kaiba did not think that climbing out would be an option this time," were absolutely amazing. Again, a wonderful image that really gets into Kaiba's head. I love it, I love it!