|Reviews for Pillow Talk|
| Surfy chapter 19 . 8/26/2010
Excellent. all of them have been excellent.
You said you wanted ideas.
How about Katara's day's of preggoness? a few from different stages, like when she first noticed the baby bump, or when she felt the first kick... even the birth... then perhaps Aang and his reactions to things like her emotions, or his own to becoming a father?
Perhaps their first time with there child? D
Maybe discovering another skybison for appa? traveling to the temples to pay respects...
goodness, your such a good writer I could see so many things come from those ideas! D
hope they were helpful.
I can't wait to see your next one out! 3
| Surfy chapter 12 . 8/25/2010
Yeah... I cracked up on this. it was totally out there random. But awesome! D
| Surfy chapter 11 . 8/25/2010
Oh what a perfect way to tell him she's preggo! haha I love it! D
| Surfy chapter 9 . 8/25/2010
Oh now that is just sweet! D I have a huge grin on my face from this chapter, just beautiful! D
Keep it up!
| Surfy chapter 7 . 8/25/2010
though I'm never the fan of anguish, you portrayed it very well in this chapter. It's also something I wish the series would have contained... the gAang went through so much torment and yet hardly showed the emotions, This would of been the perfect bridging moment in that episode. )
| Surfy chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
Zeesh. you write exactly what I've wanted and needed to read. Excellent! ) Your way with words is absolutely beautiful too.
Keep it up!
If I'm able to pull myself out of my reading induced haze I'll review again soon. XD If not I'll review after I catch up.
| carebear2010 chapter 19 . 8/24/2010
I reallly liked all the one-shots. Especially the cactus juice one:) This last one "The Kiss", was really good .You have a great writing style that gets the thoughts across and goes into a depth that I don't see very often. Thanks for writing, and please keep them coming:)
| Broken.Bells chapter 19 . 8/23/2010
Beautiful. Loved all the stories.
| Broken.Bells chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Beautiful, just beautiful.
| Broken.Bells chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
| Broken.Bells chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
| Broken.Bells chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
| Rachika chapter 19 . 8/21/2010
I didn't want to review for every chapter, so I just decided to give you one giant review. ]
First off, I love the detail in your stories. It's more than I normally can pay attention for, but after giving yours a try I've decided that it was worth reading - very much so. Secondly, I love how you portray Aang. How he's mature, but in a way that I can actually believe. You know, I have a hard time picturing Aang as older than he is in the series, but the way you write him makes it easy for me to see him as older.
And third - I'm quite excited to see this continue. I know life gets busy, so I will patiently await the next installment. ]
| UmLikeEh chapter 19 . 8/20/2010
Great stories. Took me a few days and getting my wisdom teeth removed to finish them all. Liked them a lot 3 cactus juice 3
Hope for more ]
| momo as gyatso chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I know ur pet peeve is some one favoring it and not reviewing so here we go-
This is one of my favorite books and i love ur writing. The characters ask 'What are you thinking about?' alot but I dont mind. You are an amazing, extraordiary writer and never stop sharing your gift with the world.