|Reviews for The Enemy Sees Your Light|
| Flame Ride chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
This...kind of destroys me.
Especially the end: "May I burn if I turn."
And he did. And that's...it's terrible.
But I guess that was kind of the point. -sad smile-
| Web of Obsidian chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
That last line... Oh, Anakin... Wonderful job, truly. And I don't care how long ago this was written, please, consider a second chapter at least.
| Cipher Nine chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Ohh, the last line...
| David-El chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
OH, you should definately make a follow-up chapter to this! No matter how long it's been, this story just screams for a follow up, if for no other reason than the fact that knowing who Vader was would significantly affect Luke's choices when facing him.
| Leezie chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
the second chapter idea is a good one, and I urge you to do it.
However, i seems like there would have to be more additional chapters from my point of view (no pun intended) because I think the only way for that to happen is for yoda and obi wan to teach luke at the same time, and for leias heritage to be revealed as well. in that case lukes meeting her should be changed to an even earlier date: obi wan should take him to get leia and then the three of them should go to yoda and then the skywalker twins should both become jedi trained by yoda and then face the emperer and vader.
so by all means, continue it!
may the force be with you.
| Raphabr chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
this is really godd. post more, pwease *puppy dog face*
| Gg chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
cool! continue please )