|Reviews for Naruto of the Force|
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/28
You know I am very confused, in this story, you have the Inzukias honoring LOYALTY so highly, yet in so many others you have kiba being a horn dog and threatening to violate a teammate to whom his LOYALTY should be sacrosanct, as in ABOVE REPROACH... Now it becomes CLEAR that should this clan HAVE such a high regard for loyalty then this situation would never even HAPPEN! Now in cannon this mentality persists and it is ONLY in ff that one finds a kiba sniffing around hinata like dog that needs PUT DOWN, I find it laughable that many others (you included some times) use this contrivance, simply because there is NO WAY Tsume or Hana would ALLOW IT! It would be CLAN WAR (something that even the fossilized remains of the third wouldn't tolerate), All three of them would CASTRATE the boy before allowing war to tear the village apart. AND if she is to go to the jinchuriki? Well, I think that was the old man's plan ALL ALONG.. I mean think about it.. The richest, most influential clan gets the powerhouse? The fourth's son marries well, to a powerful kunochi and FOR LOVE and the old man gets to act like his conscious is clear! (makes sense why IN CANNON none of the elders or hinata's father were against the couple.. THEY KNEW who he was, and WHAT he could become)(though I doubt they knew he'd have half a dozen bloodlines to pass down).
It strikes me as VERY odd, that NARUTO, is old enough in ALL stories to be with anyone he wants, BUT hinata (who is the same age) needs to "grow up" and get older to be with someone.. If that is how the authors here view girls then they are sadly to young OR WAAAAAAAY to old to know how the world works. The internet has made porn readily avialible to BOTH sexes regardless of age and that IRL, now factor in a world where you might DIE at 12 and that it's ACCEPTABLE... and you MIGHT see why the whole "waiting till your older" thing DOESN'T really apply to male OR female. The hyuuga heiress having to "wait" is ok.. IF SHE NEVER BECOMES A NINJA. The second she does? Well that law went out the window! (for any number of reasons: she might be killed, she might be forced to sleep with a target to insure a mission, she might be raped, she might be drugged, she be possessed, she might be mind controlled.. etc..etc.) WHY do you think the wives of clan heads are never mentioned? It's because their NOT ALLOWED to be ninja anymore (even kushina)
Also the akutski? Against a force user?.. HAHAHAHA.. Yeah right, he'd shove that shark sword up the fish-man's butt SIDEWAYS easily. and PEIN? "force BLIND".. and BANG the bodies fall to the ground USELESS. Even Obedito... One TK "combust" and his eye goes BOOM and he's OUT OF POWER. Zetsu? "plant surge" and he controls every piece of him.. The whole thing is a JOKE! Pein THINKS he's a god... Naruto MIGHT AS WELL BE ONE.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/28
AGAIN, with danzo, why would he run? He DIDN'T know anything was going to happen, why aginst naruto he was an unknown and DIDN"T know he was going against him. Also if the hokage and danzo didn't notice it? Um... Mist, Kumo, and Iwa have all allied against them... as in same as happened to Uzu.. and they were WIPED FROM HISTORY... They got NO ALLIES ANYMORE and EVERYONE is posed against them... AKA. They gotta know they are about to VANISH!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/27
You said the diyamo had enforced his punishment, but OBVIOUSLY he hasn't considering there are STILL civilians even TALKING in shinobi matters.
While I dunno if the leaf DID every thing in a DARK fic like this, one wonders just HOW CLOSE they came... and cannon still is a FOOL... Even Minato doesn't SAY anything he should in cannon, ignorance ONLY GOES SO FAR. I find the hokage claiming he's "only one man" funny... yeahm he is, COMMANDING AN ARMY... His age? Well, danzo is JUST as old, if not older and seems to have a much better hold on his people... Every lie he states, every EXCUSE is EASY to come up a counter too... In that, the whole series needs a bath... it doesn't WORK.. (thus why there are dark fics)... A LOT of stuff need dialed back, and forgotten, otherwise it makes no sense.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/27
I'm trying to think why they would even attack/kill orochimaru... HE hasn't done anything to them... Well he has to 'starkiller' but other then him... Priorities with them seem a little askew... Considering, orochimaru should be WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY down on the list(especially with Kabuto dead).
Not sure why naruto would pick up the statue and tire himself out when he ALREADY knew the plans of others when I can think of a DOZEN different way that would have taken less energy.. Although it was impressive I admit, your mental images are FAR more WIDE-SCOPING then most "naruto has the force" stories... It's kinda like "the force unleashed: Naruto style"... But still to tire himself out seems, redundant.. A simple application of "death-field" and naruto would have been refreshed and as if he never even FOUGHT after doing such a feat... GRANTED every insect, animal and plant around the tower would have bit the dust but... It would have ALSO been impressive.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/27
Why didn't the daimyo simply KILL ALL the councils? That way he INSURES only the guilty get punishment, AND THROW sarutobi out on his wrinkled behind? (I mean even today, people get fired if their INCOMPETENT at their jobs!) If leaf is thrown into chaos because of it? SO WHAT? They keep their heads attached to their bodies! He said he made a mistake reinstating sarutobi but then turns around and DOES THE SAME THING... Does that make sense when it's pointed out? Also very VAGUE on what should be done as far as punishment and it's been my experience that if you give a worm wiggle room, it's gonna get free... SO you might wanted to SPECIFY EXACTLY what should be done. Plus, maybe not let the hokage be the one that is "trusted" to carry everything else out.
wait.. I'm confused.. you said naruto can see that naruto knows orochimaru is planning something with suna but not what... Then you turn around and say that they KNOW about orochimaru's invasion of the leaf and kimmimaru can give detailed plans... Ummm... HUH? So which IS IT? (because if it's both and naruto can't put one plus one together, he's been spending too much time on-world).
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/26
Not really sure WHY naruto had to DESTROY the ship, I mean just set it to go up into orbit and float in space around the planet, it wouldn't have required fuel and NO SHINOBI has the tech to get at it, then if he requires it again for travel(or just wants to leave the planet) use the force to operate it and bring it back down... EASY. (although I DO admit, the WAY he destroyed it was COOL).
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/26
I wonder why you just didn't have naruto just KILL the third right there AND danzo. I mean, he's ALREADY killed the emperor, with AN ARMY right outside the room and didn't bat an eyelash, isn't just killing the third the SAME THING? Only on a MUCH SMALLER scale? Just kill the two that had caused him pain and let his god-parents take over, while he left. (entire story boiled down to like 3 MAYBE 4 chapters.)
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/25
The Omake on page 5 was funny
| LordHatredX chapter 10 . 1/19
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| Sam Ward chapter 10 . 1/17
This was a good story happy ending u
| my 2 guys chapter 10 . 2/2/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
| forgot password chapter 5 . 12/3/2015
all hail the master of omake
| dead for life chapter 10 . 10/5/2015
You know Shino and his family being makes a lot of sense now that I read that last chapter. Great work!
| Bane2000 chapter 7 . 8/9/2015
On the one hand I think it's of course right that Naruto gets his justice towards Danzo, Hiruzen, Homura and Koharu.
On the other hand it would have been much funnier when the Daimyo had learned in Chapter 5 of the rigged preliminary fights and would have made a clean sweep in chapter 6 (at the latest).
| DBlade59 chapter 5 . 5/12/2015
should of killed Sasuke after Orochimaru left would of been more of a shock to him, also reveal the heads just before of after the start of the prelims/his turn to fight