|Reviews for To Understand the Demon|
| blue talith chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
A very intriguing 1st chapter-grabbed my attention right away!
| EchoSerenade chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
Damn, can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, the story is great!
| pickamix chapter 6 . 5/1/2010
Great chapter... you describe things really well... so there's something different about Reid than other Slayers I take it... interesting... I can't wait for more.
| pickamix chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
Good chapter... can't wait for more.
| pickamix chapter 4 . 2/20/2010
You need a beta. There are some grammar errors that a beta would easily fix for you. There are a bunch of & signs in weird places. Also you slip tenses. If you are writing in past tense you need to stay there. The word 'is' should only ever come up in dialogue then. I only mention this stuff to be helpful because these things drop the reader out of the story.
Otherwise it is well done. I like your Reid she's wonderfully flawed... I like that in a character. Your description is great. I'm thoroughly into this story. I hope you update often so I don't lose the story.
So are there other Slayers in this universe like there were at the end of the show? Or did Buffy die and this girl get called? Or will I just have to wait and see?
| iamdk chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
this is good!
| blackhawk68 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Wow. This is a really great intro to a story. Really. I love it. Update soon, yeah?