Reviews for Wasted
A2463 chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
Absolutely love it! Really love it! Please continue!
langsohryu chapter 4 . 2/3/2012
please make a nice love story. is nice but love is better :d
GothicPheonix chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
Update please
ScOut4It chapter 4 . 6/3/2010
Like the back-story, wonder if Ella will ever feel more emotions with Hattie
ScOut4It chapter 2 . 6/3/2010
I like what you've got going on here and I also like the length of this story
Palistus chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
very nice chapter, I loved it! Hattie/Ella make such a cute couple!
Palistus chapter 3 . 1/20/2010
wo nice chappy
GothicPheonix chapter 3 . 1/19/2010
I loved the POV changes :) Inside of Hattie's's becoming possessive :)
Palistus chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
snap Alison! Nice lemon you have there. Really, it's an altogether good chapter :) though I think the sad ending scene shouldn't be the end btw like you said earlier, it should be the 2nd to last chapter to spike the intensity where the last chapter could be a neutral 'realization' scene where it ends with them both in a room, alone, staring at eachother and realizing how they complete eachother, or need eachother, or blah blah blah, then the epilogue could be a happy thing to balance it out, maybe like them in a year or so.
Palistus chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
very nice ch.1! Loved it.
GothicPheonix chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Huh :) Very interesting...does that mean the father and..Olga gave permission for Hattie to do this?