|Reviews for Ninja Tears|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
This is a really really good piece of writing. You've got everything about them down perfectly and the tenderness and care is so wonderfully warming and handled by you. It's so true that she'd deny anything was wrong. Really glad I found this fic. :-)
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Very nice. I like the idea that she would have gotten some kind of help...and Tony's reassurances are perfect.
| hey-lily-rose chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
This was great. Thank you so much.
I particularly love how you portray Ziva, you've captured something that I really believe she has. The grammar and punctuation and technical stuff was perrffect.
My favourite part was how she reacted when Tony found the valium. It was very real. It was very Ziva-like. She would have done exactly that. Denied anything was wrong. So congrats. Very nice one-shot.
| de aequitate chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Wow, this was beautifully written. You capture this venerable side of Ziva without making her completely ooc...which I find many authors have trouble doing. The same goes for DiNozzo who for me was completely in character. The ending was just perfect.
| sarah8902 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great story! Starting out with “You know you’re working too much when McGeek beats you to the bar on a Friday night.” hah and then Ziva's confusing "googling" and "ogling" again. Then Tony sees her meds.. but of course Ziva tries to act like everything's fine and she's okay. And thank goodness Tony was able to break down, or at least start to break down, the walls with Ziva. And he was so sweet. From telling her that she doesn't have to be the 'stoic soldier' and that she was strong for getting help.. "tenderly wiped the tear away" and softly kissing her cheek like she had done weeks earlier. “You are telling me that you would rather sit at home with me on a Friday night and drink wine than go to a bar and chat up college girls?” Ziva asked sceptically. “Yes,” Tony replied without a hint of sarcasm in his voice.” ... “Shall we?” he asked. Ziva nodded as Tony reached out to her and interlocked his fingers with hers, giving her hand a supportive squeeze. Together they walked to the elevator. As the doors closed, Ziva felt something that she couldn’t ever remember feeling. Hope.
Perfect ending. I loved how you brought this up and wrote the whole thing.. we all know it has to come up at one point sometime in the near future. And I really hope that if/when! they show us a little bit of Ziva having.. well not even like a breakdown, but just a moment like this one.. that it is similar to the one you wrote here. Can't wait to read some more of your NCIS stories :) Maybe one following this?.. please! Again.. great story.
| Mooncombo chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
*sigh* So sweet. Beautifully written. Wouldn't mind getting a little more of this story...hint, hint.
| DarkGrayWolf chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
AW thats a very sweet story, also it is very well written. very good jod on this story! i love it :)
| madpsychogirl chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
HOW DID I NOT KNOW YOU WERE ON ? *squees*
I love this line: "“You know you’re working too much when McGeek beats you to the bar on a Friday night.” Ziva didn’t reply." IT made me giggle!
But seriously? Wow. You took my breathe away - that was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful :)
| dolphin12345 chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Nice, i wish that there was qa scene like that in a episode, the writers don't show the reprocussions of Ziva's time in somolia, which i think they should. Well done!
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
that left me feeling sad warm and all gushy inside. it was wonderful to read.
| CHOCOLATE.LUVR.forever chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
aw how cute...please continue
| holikimaela chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
This was a beautiful fic, I wish that the writers would deal with Ziva's trauma more on the show - I understand that they are trying to maintain a sort of ambiguity about the character's outside lives, but something like this affects your whole self!
Oh well. Thank you for this, it was a lovely, well-written, in-character piece.
| gsr4ever chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Nice job. I could definitely see something like this onscreen
| Gemcity08 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I absolutely love this. So in character, so perfect. I would love to see this on the show. Great job.
| moonfaerie326 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I loved it, absolutely, utterly adored it! You did brilliantly with it and I am just now wondering how I have stumbled across your stuff before. [I know its probably because I don't read fanfiction as much as I would like to but I am still curious about it anyway]
You are amazing! Absolutely brilliant and now I am going to go tell you this on LJ. HAHA.
Kudos to you my friend!