Reviews for Sweet, Sweet Dreams: Secrets Unfold
Tenten chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
Oh my lord that was freaking amazing! Of all fabrics I've read, this is probably my favorite. Keep up the good work!
femalemetalhead chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
better than I thought it would be... nice.
Sam chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I loved this story...
AntiGravitation chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
"Loved, loving, love."

I wonder if kakashi been a peeping tom hiding somewhere the forest xD
Gitona chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This story was pretty good. I think it strayed a bit on capturing Sasuke's personality but not bad enough. I definitely loved the lemon scene but I was slightly annoyed with your use of "his love" over and over again.
BadButt94 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This story was so cute. I loved it
meimeidona2419 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
This was super cute, i loved it ]

great job!
aisuru Aki chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
You were jizzing when you wrote this weren't you. Lol Jk
xXx Corrupted Angel xXx chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
aah so nice
Nautical.Empress chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Aw...Idk about everyone else but my breath was taken away!
Prussian Approved chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Hellz ya! Now, just gotta make it come true and my life will be complete. :D Oh Kishimoto-san! We have to have a little talk about your little famous manga/anime, shall we? :]
Killercat-nya chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Aw, that was cute! Great job on the

story I loved it! Ja Ne!
Dark Misstress of Unknown chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Bloody hell!

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! :D

Its so cute.

Hehe it made me laugh how Kakashi was all like "Naru-I mean, the person you’re having them about."

That cracked me up.

Its so cute how oblivious Sasuke can be towards his own feelings for Naruto.

Well very good job and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
Hidden-Tresure chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I love Sasuke being the seme! cool one
Troublesque chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Real Cute. There's just two things that bother me:

1. The entire story is in bold. There's absolutely no reason why it needs to be so.

and

2. The very last line...you mixed up the present and future tenses. It should read "Loved, loving, love." That makes a lot more sense

Nice job!

-Zev
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