|Reviews for A Bet's A Bet|
| Cosmic Knights chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
(I'm waaayyy to lazy to log in right now. Sorry. XD)
But...OH MY GREAT GOODNESS! *Dies of massive blood loss*
Seriously. Amazing. Just. Wow. I. Can't. Think. Right. Now.
MAKE A SEQUEL! I so wanna see how that night plays out. ;) XD
I loved this though, seriously. It's about the...tenth? Eleventh? Time I've read it. Really, it's amazing and epic! :)
| Roses are Red. We have thorns chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
You have to write that smut! Oh My GOD! Iggy Police uniform one happy fan-girl -total fangasm- A-anyway, Poor IGGY! I can't believe he doubted his beauty! O_O at least there's a happy ending -way happy...so happy , you killed me.
| Clock goes tik tok chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I hope u don't get murded by... A dragon-sheep..? :D
but yeah, anyways, I like this story :)
| Empress Vegah chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
That was sure the hottest thing. HOT. TOTALLY.
I still wonder how Alfred managed to hide his burning desire for Arthur for THREE whole weeks. He's totally in control, for sure. But everything was perfect, and the aggressiveness of Arthur dwindled when Alfred took over, how cute. .
About the grammar, I didn't notice anything out of place. It's nice, and the words are flowing. Transitions are good.
Overall, this story is an EPIC WIN! I love this!
| AmericanxHero chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I loved this! :D I got about several nosebleeds reading this (*is sorta a die-hard America/England fan*) and I just love it. x3 Very nice! db
| Anonymous Improvement chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
hey hey hey... we have a whole other week of kink smex. so WHY exactly is this complete XDD i'll be waiting for more kink, neh? XP
| HappiLoliMaiTan chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Amazing, Amazing, BLOODY AMAZING! ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEEEAAASSSEEEE? I love it, it was perfect!
I wanna know what happens if Arthur is a cop!
| hootpoop12 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
hahahahaha i love good fics xD especially good smutty ones lmfao i was a little heart wretched when arthur asked francis if he was ugly ._. I was like: "No, Arthur! Youre beautiful!" or something corny like that xD but i liked how the rivaly between arthur and francis was like the typical 'ill kill you!' thanks for writtin awsome fic
| icy-piyo21 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
There are a few mistakes- a few misspells, like 'since' into 'sense', but I think it's ok otherwise. AND LE SMUT WAS GREAT! Really hot. Oh God you win.
Marry me and have my kids.
| ShadowfireNightblade chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
| Sadic-Fanny -Zodiaque chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Ahah, I love it!
But just so you know "Oui, parler de Francis Bonnefoy" means "yes, talking about Francis Bonnefoy". The right traduction is "Oui, Francis Bonnefoy à l'appareil" or "Oui, ici Francis Bonnefoy". And "I knew it" is "Je le savais". "Je l'ai su" means "I've known it". Sorry, it's like I just make a comment to talk about your french mistakes but it's my native language.
But now, I really loved this story! I'm a new fan of Hetalia (and of America/England couple) and this fic is awesome to make me want to read more fic :D
So thanx, and pardon me for the french criticism 3
| pelimphanea chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Oof. I think I was sweating from embarrassment reading this, but I absolutely adore this story! The writing is very clever and simple, it went well with those two, and the brief changes of mood. I think I love the way you write their dialogue more than anyone else I've read. I was so delighted by your humor in this, as well as your good grammar and spelling (thank you!).
Anyway, this was so much fun to read. I couldn't stop giggling like a madwoman. xD
| M.D. Off-Red chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
How naughty... I loved it. :) It made me laugh, but once again I'd like to say I loved the way you write and give proper details and descriptions. It's hard to find one with such lovely quality. :D
Very good work!
| NajikaIce chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Dragon-sheep? That's scary, man!
On the other hand...
*dies of a massive nosebleed*
| watercrab chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This was really cute! I'm not familiar with this series but I love the interaction of the characters!