Reviews for Elegy
BeforeThePrologue chapter 9 . 12/23/2014
Amazing.
BeforeThePrologue chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
Excellent evolution. I can practically map her growth in my mind.
BeforeThePrologue chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Beautiful. It reads almost like a poem.
Djinn Slashfen chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
I will first admit that I haven't reviewed a fic-any fic-in a good long while. Nonetheless, I felt that, having read yours, it deserved a response.

It is an excellently crafted series of moments, incredibly evocative considering the short length of each. I greatly admire the poetic nature of your prose, and the way that you never allow that poetry and its inevitable metaphor to tangle up the meaning and underlying story of the piece. That is to say, you tell a poetic story, but you do it clearly and concisely.

I often felt that the PC in Dragon Age deserved a deeper, more fleshed-out perspective, one that wasn't really possible due to the medium. You have given your Cousland what the game lacked-turmoil, strife, true fire and conflict-and you rightfully deserve the praise you've been given for it. Bravo.

~Djinn
CharlotteHibiki chapter 9 . 9/6/2010
Amazing story, thank you!
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 9 . 9/3/2010
amazing end
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 8 . 9/3/2010
so heartbreaking
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 7 . 9/3/2010
poor girl
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 6 . 9/3/2010
that part of the game bugged me real bad too
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 5 . 9/3/2010
even the carnage is beautiful
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 4 . 9/3/2010
every word is laced with so much sadness
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
she sounds a bit mad, though quite an eloquent madwoman
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
wow, what a way to describe her dreams
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
that was so darkly beautiful
kinsley5 chapter 9 . 8/16/2010
This is beautiful. I love this so much. A truly brilliant work.
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