Reviews for Precious Maya
Guest chapter 6 . 12/22/2016
Well, the gaurds could have slapped a Batman mask on Phoenix and place Joker makeup on Engarde...maybe have Phoenix yell out "WHERE ARE THEY?!"
Skillet28561 chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
You never actually played Farewell, my Turnabout?
Skillet28561 chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Let me guess. It's Engarde isn't it?
Eveyannie chapter 2 . 4/1/2015
this is really good I loved that case, well done
skypasser chapter 12 . 4/19/2013
I feel sick reading this...
It was really good, and it was written so well, that it made me feel sick...
Some part I just had to skim it because.. it was heavy stuff...
Emiko Gale chapter 12 . 2/21/2013
Even though I think it blows to see the love between Phoenix and Maya become non-existant, I still think this is a great story.

I like the character development you gave Matt and I ADORE Dekiller in this fanfic.
ClearlyOriginal chapter 12 . 2/7/2013
801tman chapter 12 . 1/31/2013
This was my FAVORITE fanfic I ever read. It kept me reading for about two hours straight. Sad that you won't be writing anymore fanfics, but good job on this one.
Cookie chapter 12 . 1/4/2013
That was a good story, but it should have been Phoenix's bavy instead of Engard's
Guest chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
D: This is amazing and yet i hate tragedys ;; the only consolation is that Engarde is such a boss Oddly enough, I've always loved Engarde and he seems so much more calculating than in the game. And a tad more psycho but that adds to the charm 3
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Nuuuu! I've always adored Matt Engarde (for whatever reason) and it made me smile so much that he was here / I hope nothing too harsh happens to Matt. *keeps reading*
TheSylverBlue chapter 12 . 11/23/2011
This was an amazing story, and you're right, it truly was difficult to read.

I really liked how you made Matt into this deranged psychopath when in the games, he's just this uncaring jerk who uses people as tools for his own selfish needs. But seriously, that cruel, sadistic, sick-minded ba- I mean biscuit...ugh, I'd like to knock his teeth out.

Anyway, I really feel sorry for both Nick and Maya. It's so sad, the things they went through. They didn't deserve any of that, and a traumatic experience like that, I don't think they'd truly get over it, even with time. Wounds leave scars right?

Again, great story and I gotta say it was wonderfully written. I really enjoyed this. Will read sequel soon ;)
soneji123 chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
It's scary...
purplepjs chapter 12 . 6/9/2011
Oh man.

I think you broke me. This is just. Wow. It's harsh, raw, emotional and a very tough read - but in a good way. I stopped writing my own fic for a little while and thought I'd read some other people's work for a break, but I don't think I can write Phoenix again now tonight!

It was so heartbreaking - not just what Maya went through, but reading Phoenix so... well... flawed. He's usually portrayed as this champion of all that is good but in this fic he's almost detestable at times.

This was very well written. Nice job.
Demx101 chapter 12 . 2/1/2011
Excellent work. I looked at this a few days ago and I was blown away. Its amazing!
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