Reviews for Optimus in the Cave
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
what the fuck
GGMK chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
This was disgusting.
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
arctapus chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I would think you are just being facetious and making parodies of your stories. But I noticed a trend. You are very turned on by excrement. But that is okay really. Because this story is a real piece of &%$#.

Thank you.
Pikaoh chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
This story was haunting. It wsa so haunting I barely resisted the urge to turn the background color from "light" to "dark".