|Reviews for I Was Once Your Father|
| 372259 chapter 1 . 2/16
This was absolutely incredible! It was just so REAL!
I adored it! The writing was amazing!
| Mockgirl chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I like this story
U great writer
| Dingbat142001 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
To be honest, the summary really had me stumped. I had no idea what was going on, but I am so glad I read this. I can definitely see Shikamaru prioritizing based on his Will of Fire instead of him being a father. Thus is the like of a shinobi, I guess, but his conflicting duties were written very well. Great job!
| Blade of Sparda chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Deep, emotional, and just beautifully written. Great story.
| xXxTriggerxXx chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Always wondered what would happen between Shikamaru and Asumas son later on in life. This is a very realistic story, good job
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I liked it, but i don't think Shikamaru would have quit being a ninja, and of all things, i don't think temari would have let him
| iTomo chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Aw the asato and shikamaru scene was really nice :)
| kon chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
the most amazing fanfiction i ever read!
i couldn't stop crying...
thank u for made this wonderful story..
| RandomWolf121 chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I cried while reading this. The emotions portrayed were almost poetic. Amazing.
| JoiZ. D chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Asato's speech shocked me, really. I haven't though of Asuma that way... Awesome...
| OnlyTimeWillTell chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
first shikatema i've read in years, and i was very pleased. shikamaru seems to definitely matured and changed from his 16 year old self. however, i'm not too sure i completely agree with your characterization of temari. she's really mellowed out, and i don't think she's handling these situations at all like the temari i know would. i mean, it was a great read, but the main characters were a bit OOC... also, very very dramatic, so kudos to your writing skills!
| julia-reads chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
fucking beautiful, I swear. I freaking cried.
I just need to say, the part where Shikamru's being carried home, Chouji says 'sumimasen.' It's much too formal for a childhood best friend. I think 'gomen' would be much more appropriate. 'Sumimasen' is for super polite people who barely know each other. :b
anyways, I love your work. All your stories are absolutely amazing.
| Lille Venn chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
You really captured emotion in this text. I was reading with a lump in my throat. It was very well written and I enjoyed the story.
| Naara-no-temari chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
OH my god! this is so beautiful i cried a lot at the end! this is just wonderful! i loved it!
| bubbles12345 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Cute! Liked the discussion between Shikamaru and his genin, although there could've been a bit more elaboration as to how Asuma really did love Kurenai and him.