|Reviews for The Secret of Bumblebee|
| FourSwordsAddict chapter 71 . 2/17
this was amazing! :D thrilling and epic to the end
| Sweet S 22xx chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
| Sweet S 22xx chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
| Guest chapter 71 . 12/10/2013
I loved your book and read it in 2 days could not put it down
| Crystal doll chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
* gem glows purple for excitement * wow this story is good so far great job!
| madagascarmaster chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
...This, will be interesting.
| moonlightnight1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
| Kangarooney chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Are you aware that half a million IS 5,000? Just saying since you said: "There were over half a million bots on that colony and we only managed to save a little over 5000." Basically they saved them all. :/ Just pointing that out.
Oh, and halfway through, everything becomes underlined. You might want to fix that too.
| FTW chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
BUMBLEBEE IS A GIRL?
you just raped my childhood.
| ColorGuardSweetHeartHottieFury chapter 71 . 5/24/2012
Now what a wonderful way to end a story.
What a wonderful story indeed. :)
Well first off I must say, I am terribly sorry it took me so long to review again. I litterally had this story on my to do list for reviews like forever, I actualy kept adding the tab frequently since I always have the internet on when my computers on... I appoligize that I took so long to do so when I really wanted to, or even to read the last chapter, though I usual read the other ones soon after you posted them... I just had life get in my way, got a new job attending a new college, work that goes with it, then the little time I had I usually had to many stories blowing around in my mind from the amazing things that happened to me and those I met that just created certian new stories and chapters..
Well I really wanted to read this, and I finaly realized while I was sitting boared watching absolutly nothing on tv, I felt like I was watching a black screen/blank screen it was that dull... I realized that I could actually finally read the last chapter and review... And I am really happy I did, got me out of a bored slump I was in this evening.
I am happy everything turned out great, that Bumblebee came back to life, I loved the last chapter where she got to meet her mother, and talk to her, as well as Primus, now that was an awesome chapter. I loved your description of the white paned walls and pillars that was oh so beautiful I could just imagine it... Great job.
I also loved that she finally had children. I remember earlier with the miscariage and that stung close to me. I'm adopted but my parents had several miscarriages before they choose to adopted and eventaly thanks to God were given me... I mean stories of miscariage, and what people go through in them strikes close to home, and I aplaude how you handled it... I think it was very true to how people who suffer miscariage feel.
I love how well this story was writen. I also loved how you made Megatron a father, brought his daughter back to him, the in such a sweet way made him a Godfather "OOoooooohhhhhh!" I realy loved that.
I can say I really enjoyed this story. I'm sorry it has to end, thoug all great things must in the end... LOL
I'm really glad with what you did, and where you took this story, and can't wait to read what's next up your sleave.
(Oh and by the way if this doesn't seem like a long review, I appoligize, I wish I could go on with more, but i gotta pull and all nighter studying for a test I choosen to take after I work all day tomorrow I come home then lock myself in a computer room for two hours.. Yeah finalS.. :( ;) I wish I could have chosen a better time to review, but after reading the chapter I could not prolonge reviewing it was oh so delicious and incredible.
Also I understand if you aren't doing a continuation curently. THough it would be one terrific story if you did, I can understand, and hope maybe in the near future a continuation will be produced. For this was one incredible tale.
Till next time... I'm outtie.. Have a wonderful night and thanks onces again for one increadibly amazing story...
Have one amazingly Fantastic Day and summer... Thanks for everything :) Bye!
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 71 . 4/23/2012
Might've been 2 years since this was started but it was an awsome journey to partake on.
| DreamStoryWeaver chapter 71 . 4/23/2012
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Happy Ending! Great job Sass! Loved every chapter!
| StarLightMaker17 chapter 71 . 4/22/2012
Very fantastic story! Putting aside some grammar errors, it was nicely detailed and organized! Very creative with some suspenceful, dramatic, and funny moments and twists! Overall a nice and fun story to read! Thank you for and Dream for taking the time to making this story!
| Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 71 . 4/20/2012
aw, its over!
well, you finished thsi off BRILLIANTLY. it was a superb ending to an amazing story which I am sorry to see over.
My favourite part of this wa when Bumblebee came back to life, best line ever!
Megatron as the Godfather? cool!
well, Im glad I got to see this happen, and wish you luck with your other fics!
| Lady Quickshift chapter 71 . 4/19/2012
ok, I haven't been following this story for the whole 2 years as I didn't know about fanfiction that long, but it was one of the first I read when I found out about it about a year ago and I have been following it ever since. Thank you for putting this out there, it's awesome stories like this that keep my coming back to FFN.